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Originally posted by popmusic
Yas! I'm not sure if I should submit something new or my Taylor Swift/Max Martin-stylized song called... Taylor Swift 
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This is great, and it sounds really clean and polished. What do you use?
Also, the only thing I suggest is maybe try to use different chords, or change up the rhythm/beat of the song (or both). That chord progression sounds a little dull because like everyone uses it. Not sure if you're into music theory or not, but you could try adding in some major / minor 7ths or some suspended fourths! Hope that helped.
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Originally posted by HrvoCro
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This track really sounds good. I love the production on it, and like Nait said, it sounds really super-futuristic.
What I would suggest (& again, this is just my personal opinion,) maybe you could try changing up the melody a little bit? It consists of a lot of repeating notes, and making it more interesting could make the song
-more catchy
-have better replay value
-emphasize the rhythm, making the song a BOP.
Like the "insomnia"'s that repeat toward the end of the song, I
really like those because it was a really good, catchy melody! I just feel like the song needs more of that.
Also, I would probably turn down the vocals and the piano just a bit. They were a little loud.
And if you need help with a melody, look up "In My Arms" by Kylie Minogue. Your song has the exact same chord progression as it, and a similar tempo!
Hope this helped!
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Originally posted by Peep Show
So why did y'all ignore my song?
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I really liked it! It was cute and sounds like a Tinashe / Natalie La Rose kind of beat. I hear a little bit of DJ Mustard in there too.
Great job.
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Originally posted by dansuxx
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This is great! It's really well-produced!
The only criticism I have is that the pitch modulation on a part of the melody is a little overbearing at times. It should be used kinda sparingly, otherwise it distracts the listener from this
great song!
I was shook you were finally gonna start this while I was away during all July! I'm definitely signing up, even tho I can't produce yet. 
Hope I can learn a thing or two.
