I wrote something to this challenge today...I went with the sad route, rather than angry, because I have nothing to feel angry about, really...I strayed away from my usual writing style, but didn't completely desert it for this song. I used language that's a bit odd, but I was feeling inspired by some of the poetry I heard today.
This song doesn't have a bridge (like Rihanna's Fool In Love, for example) because I felt like it didn't need one. That's one piece of advice for you: we want a complete song, but not a song with unneeded bits thrown in. Anyway, here it is, if anyone cares to read.
Platinum Moon[V1]
A young man of twenty-two
With so much he had to do
He was bright and full of life
He had nothing if not pride
He had someone who loved him
But the man was unaware
The boy, though seventeen
Had still loved without a care
[H]
And the days started to go
The boy, two weeks before eighteen
He thought the man should know
About his love that came to be
He never got to tell the man;
The boy got to him too late
Under the moonlight, the boy took his hand
The man had met his fate
[C]
So every night under
The familiar platinum moon
He brings a rose to the man
Who was called to go too soon
Up above is the eyes
Of the angels in the skies
He knows the man is watching…
In the whispers of the night
[V2]
The years had come and passed
But the boy’s love, it had last
Each memory was a treasure
That nothing else could measure
He had someone who loved him
But he’d never feel that way
The boy, though old with age
Had still loved the man the same
[H]
And the years started to go
The boy, soon to see his grave
He knew the man would know
About the love that got away
The one who loved the boy
He, too, had been too late
The light inside was void
The boy had met his fate
[C]
So every night under
The familiar platinum moon
He brings a rose to the boy
Who had suffered all-life through
Up above is the eyes
Of the angels in the skies
He knows the boy is watching…
In the whispers of the night
By the way, it's apparently Poetry in Your Pocket day...and all the English classes in my school participated in it.
I thought it was tomorrow, but I was wrong.
The one I've chosen to submit was the last one i worked on. Hopefully it doesn't get my ass kicked out of this competition. 
