Hey everyone,
these are my thoughts on all the entries for this task, the scores will be posted later alongside ImARudeBoy's thoughts & scores.
Nait Phoenix - Played
This is a decent song, it's a long way down from your best songs but still an okay set of lyrics. I love the bridge and can imagine with some tweaks this song could be a hit, bu as it is right now I just can't find anything hooky about it.
TheSeenScene - End of the Chapter
This is a huge step up, really happy with what you've come up with this week. It gives me independent woman kinda vibes and the Romeo & Juliet reference is awesome. Filled with potential hooks. Great work!
doodledot13 - Won't Be Home
I liked this a lot, it was great in places but mostly hovered between great and OK. There were points where it felt like you were over-doing it with the amount of words per line and it read a bit sluggish but overall, nice work.
Hugamari - Here's To The Women
Oh my God I am in love with this song. You have come so far since the first series I really am so proud! This is perfect, it feels really celebratory and like I just wanna dance to it now before there's even music or a melody. Amazing!
insidepariscloset - N/A
I think with an inspiring song it's very easy to cross the line from inspiring to cheesy/predictable. There were bits of your song I liked, but on the whole I thought it was a bit uninspired and like something that would stand no chance of being a hit at all.
Midnight - Heels
I love the way you've used high-heels to make it a proper empowerment anthem, I like the chorus but apart from that it's not really up to scratch. The verses are confusing and not in an abstract or metaphorical/descriptive way. I think you need to work on the structure of verses a bit more.
AdamAl4 - I Don't Miss You
I really don't know how to critique this without repeating myself, the bare bones of this show there's a good song somewhere in the idea. However the lyrics are just a little bit mundane and feel empty when I read them. I think next week, just work on the song for a few days and submit on the Friday so you've had maximum time to work on it.
Kavish - 13th Park Avenue
I think no matter what the lyrical quality is you always have the most interesting way with words out of all the contestants, love the mysterious side to the song, it's another great meaning from you. I'm a bit disappointed with the actual words as I feel it's not you best, but still a cut above most of the other contestants.
Jack! - Lovers Pain
I love the detail in these lyrics, it really makes all the difference and makes it seem more personal rather than just words about something plucked from their brain. The chorus could be stronger but as it is, it's still competent.
DripDrip - My Smile
These really give me a R & B vibe, which is something I love. The chorus is amazing and I loved the words you used and it seemed pretty catchy without having a proper rhyming scheme. Good job and keep this up!
Mastamind - This Night My Night
I like you that you tried something different, but after last week and the bits of your lyrics that I loved, I'm disappointed. I was really hoping you'd go with something a bit more complicated than this. Similar to other contestants it kind of blurs between serious and too cheesy.
kylespearsfenty - No Man, No More
I love your chorus, the "don't need no man, no more" line is genius and sounds like it's be super catchy. I'm not too in love with the rest of the song but I think the chorus just carries you above some of the less impressive entries this week, good job.
Thnx for the comment tho, i'll brush up on it if I proceed to the next round 
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But wait, how can DripDrip got into the bottom 3? His lyrics got positive comments from funnel
well, I better go all out in the next round to get into the top 3 
