e437
Your formatting was spectacular
It really felt like you were taking me on a journey through the entire competition. I could see exactly what you were thinking throughout the entire game. I also loved how I could see your personality through your entry; it reflected your positive attitude, your extroversion, and your friendliness. Most of all, your entry was honest; you spoke up about the things that you didn't like during the game and really delivered excellent constructive criticism. The only thing that was lacking in your entry was that it addressed the specifics of each round rather than your experience as a whole. You could've focused on the totality of your feelings towards the game rather than simply summarizing each round. Overall, your entry was fantastic - I could truly see how much fun you had playing The Battle. Your emotions and personality truly shined through this entry. Bravo
Timber
Ahh, another phenomenal entry! This entry was almost the polar opposite of E's (in a good way); you had exactly what his entry lacked. You really summed up your feelings towards this game in a concise and put-together fashion. Your entry completely satisfied all of the challenge's criteria, which, as a judge, is something admirable to see. There was no question left unanswered in your entry; I knew exactly how you felt about the game - its highs, its lows, the host; everything. You were just specific enough to clue me into what happened during some of the games without going too in detail and forgetting the big picture. On the other hand, what your entry lacked was a sense of genuine emotion. Although I could tell that you truly enjoyed this game, your entry felt a bit forced, and I couldn't see your amazing personality through you words. However, overall, your entry was phenomenal as well. It really showcased exactly how you felt about The Battle and I applaud you for going above and beyond the challenge criteria.
Before y'all read the winner, just let me say that this was seriously such a hard decision. You are truly the most deserving final two. I could see your passion for this game in both of your entries, and you're both winners in my book. However, because I have to choose one winner...
THE WINNER IS...
. Or better search for my post 
. Queen 
