Lemme just put my opinion here: I find songs that rhyme to simply be more fulfilling to read. I strongly encourage you NOT force a rhyme, because a bad rhyme is worse than no rhyme. At the same time, though, rhyming is one of the easiest and strongest assets any writer has, which is why you'll be hard pressed to find a song that DOESN'T implement rhyming into the lyrics.
Off of the top of my head, "Friday" by Rebecca Back has very little rhyming within its lyrics. Take that how you will.
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Originally posted by Jackson
If you read my review closely I clearly stated the song felt too long because of the messy structure of the song (putting every few words on a separate line when they would have flowed better together). The first part of the song needed some sort of structure because it lacked both a meter and a rhyme scheme. It just felt like words, and even those words weren't particularly powerful. I already gave you an example in my review (basically it would have flowed better if you had cut down the lines in that section by half).
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Send your scores and go to bed omg.
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Originally posted by Alesus
poor comparison. a lot of poems don't rhyme either lol  |
I didn't wanna say anything but
Free verse poetry exists.
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Decided to condense my posts into one big post and bump the thread. Saint!
aside from the second verse, that's what a lot of other people I've shown the song to seemed to like
But your chorus was one of my favorites this round