Confident is demi-lite. Revival is truly a moving masterpiece...a impactful embodied work of art that will be remembered through all ages and all times...no matter how many wars, no matter how many ice ages, revival will be the one that is carried down the line through the gods and celebrated by their people. revival is the new bible...thank you
38. Love Wounds (Intro)
You took creative freedom with the structure much too far. It was a bit of a mess. There was no visible rhyme scheme, which would have been OK if there had been any sort of structure. This is the right part of the competition to experiment, but make sure you’re submitting songs and not free verse poems. Still, as a poem it was good but nothing extraordinary.
Okay enough writing like an even more abstract Lorde
