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19. mxtthewdelrey - Intro: Girl's World Talkshow
I appreciate that you took a risk with this. But for me, it didn’t pay off.
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Originally posted by Jackson
19. mxtthewdelrey – Girls World Talkshow
This was really cheesy, and not really in a good way. A lot of the lines don’t really make sense, especially in the first two stanzas. I assume the girls world talkshow has to do with young girls using their imaginations, but there really isn’t enough context to make any sort of conclusion. The FREAK SHOW thing at the end also seemed unnecessary and extra. This kinda felt like a mix between a PC music song and a Melanie Martinez song, neither of which I’m a huge fan of. There were a few things that worked still. The ring thing with the pizza boy and parents was mildly cute.
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God I hate the word
cheesy 
But I'm actually really pleased that you called it a mix between PC Music and Melanie Martinez because that's pretty much really where I'm coming from. It's just a shame I don't think people understand my aesthetic/ideas. I just don't like to explain myself because I feel like it should speak for itself. I guess I'll have to gift all the judges VIPOTY EP so they can understand my inspirations.
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Originally posted by Hor
Okay. 1-2-3-4 away with this. It sounded like a terrible 80s novelty song. I tried to like it because it's definitely unique and humorous but I don't know. Maybe if the flow had been better, it would've made this a stronger entry but because it was off, it felt like a troll entry (especially with the intro). I appreciate the girl power message.
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Thank you! Please give me tips on how to improve my flow, I don't really understand the technical stuff. I definitely think that when performing the song that it flows very very well. It definitely was not a troll entry! This is just what i like to do! But thank you anyway
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