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Tournament: I Love Money Season 2 | Recommendations for Season 3
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I also learned words like “flop, drag, slay…”
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Bye Dom 
I loved all the entries tho 
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Originally posted by e437
I loved all the entries tho |
All?
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Member Since: 3/14/2013
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dddd;
They were good sis 
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Hmm.
Re-read the entries, and i agree. Everyone did good.
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Oh I get it, no one knows who will become paymaster this week, and observing the TV Show I Love Money eliminations, everyone is feeling a bit positive for a reason 
I'll just wait for the challenge result, then we will get the truth.
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I updated the OP with all of the links
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The judgings are all in! But now I need some sleep...
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Hello ILM contestants.
Now we are down to the final 4. Here are what our lovely judges had to say about your entries:
 Zunerl231 judging: 3/10
You summarized out game very simply. I was hoping for more detail all around  and a 2 day delay
Nasiir15 judging: 7.1/10 An improved summary of the game. You did an elaborate version of rl231's entry. i still am not sure if it convinced me to join into this game. Great summary tho.
CrazyCat judging: 10/10 WOW. This read was excellent. The second through fourth paragraphs really sold me in terms of wanting to join in on the game. It gave me some perspective of how you thought about this game (from coming back from the previous season til now). And your notion to " put a lot of work everyone will see it, and will praise your for that." is exactly what your getting from me this round
e437 judging: 10/10 NICE. This entry is very well organized and planned out. Aside from "English Grammar" stuff, I like how you organized your talking points so we were able to know strong components of what I Love Money has to offer. It also came with some personal perspective and sheaded light on the overall status of the game. Excellent entry as well Cupid
rl231 -
I'm sorry but as a student who got straight A+'s in my English class I'm quite offended you didn't bother to spell-check or use punctuation in your entry. Sending in an entry with a pretty huge spelling mistake like 'ming' which is actually British slang for ugly, when it's supposed to be 'mind' is pretty ridiculous. The whole entry just felt rushed (which is weird seeing as you had forever to complete it with all the delays). The actual content doesn't even sell the game, why would I wanna join when you say "people will probably quit"... Sounds... Enticing. 
3/10
Nasiir15 -
Your entry was short, sweet and to the point. It was very concise but it also felt very genuine. I liked the personal touch you added by saying how much you enjoyed taking part yourself. I feel like maybe you could have added a little more flare rather than use such generic phrases, but it still does the job.
7/10
CrazyCat -
No you would meet fab people like "addicted”
I felt like the entry was a little long, you could cut out some unnecessary stuff like the entire first paragraph. I think you should work on putting your points across in fewer words. The content however was excellent, I adore the fact that you actually took something away from the experience and learned some new words. Things like that really add a personal touch and make you want to be a part of the game, so good job. I would have liked a little more information about the game, examples of challenges and things to balance out the personal stuff but overall it's a great entry.
8/10
e437
On the flip side to CrazyCat's entry, this is an example of 'the informative entry'. I like how you explained the format of the game and gave us some examples of challenges. The shout-out to Zune was cute however I would have liked if you added a little more personality to the entry. It would have been good to explain what you took from the game etc instead of generic "this games awesome" comments. A very good entry on the whole, I would certainly join the game after reading this.
8/10
NICKIMINAJ
rl231: 'Twas late. 0/10
Nasiir15: I liked how you talked about the use of team work, and how it helps. I also liked how you talked about the merge, and how important it becomes. 8/10
CrazyCat: For some odd reason, I almost started crying tears of joy when I read, "In this game I learned a lot of things, I learned more English words, because for challenges we have to use all sorts of different words and since English is not my first language it was a good opportunity to study some more English for me," I don't know why, but that was so cute to me. I'm glad we could help you develop that skill. Your pitch was really good and I like how you encompassed the challenges because they are a big part. 8.75/10
e437: You were the only one that didn't try to focus the entire pitch around ATRL+. You described the challenges and other benefits of the game, such as making new friends, and I really liked that about your entry. 9/10 ethan
rl231: 5
Nasiir15: 9
Short, sweet, and to the point. You gave a great outline of the game and what to expect. You're awesome!
CrazyCat: 9.5
I'm so glad you talked about how I Love Money has changed you. I don't know if we can really attribute all of it to this game, but you have come a long way since Season 1. You highlighted everything I think is important. Great job dude!
e437: 10
First of all, I came up with a lot of the challenges and format when I hosted Season 1  But you gave a great outline of the game and I love the aspect you talked about where you never know what you're going to get for the challenge. We really do have a random hodgepodge of them! Great job.
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With this it is now time to see who is the paymaster:
Nasiir15: 7.775/10
NICKIMINAJ: 8
Zune: 7.1
ethan: 9
Cupid: 7
e437: 9.25 + .2 = 9.45/10
NICKIMINAJ: 9
Zune: 10
ethan: 10
Cupid: 8
CrazyCat: 9.0625/10
NICKIMINAJ: 9.5
Zune: 9
ethan: 8
Cupid: 8
rl231: 2.75 +.20 = 2.95/10
NICKIMINAJ: 0
Zune: 3
ethan: 5
Cupid: 3[
So
The person with the higher average is:
e437 you are the paymaster and winner of this challenge!
With these averages CrazyCat, rl231, Nasiir15, although your checks are in the vault, there is a TWIST!!!
Twist
As opposed to e437 picking who should be out, the twist is e437 will choose which person should go to the final. A curveball were throwing in as the judging panel is were going to have the the last pick as to whom should be in the final.
e437, Please submit a name of whom you would like to have in the finals with you by 11PM EST
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Yeah I knew it sucked  I just had a ton of school work since teachers put everything like tests and such to this past week since spring break is next week, so basically, I'm sorry. I would've owned in the other music game because THAT is definitely my forte
Also, "ming"...I meant mind. Is there a massive facepalm emoticon?
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Start kissing up people to e437, he has until 11PM EST to make his decision
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I think this is the first time the judges all agreed on scores 
Congrats Dan and good luck to the rest of y'all.
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Originally posted by rl231
Yeah I knew it sucked I just had a ton of school work since teachers put everything like tests and such to this past week since spring break is next week, so basically, I'm sorry. I would've owned in the other music game because THAT is definitely my forte
Also, "ming"...I meant mind. Is there a massive facepalm emoticon? |
I knew what you meant but fff girl, like it takes 10 seconds to proof-read. I just found it hilarious because ming is slang for ugly
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Originally posted by rl231
Also, "ming"...I meant mind. Is there a massive facepalm emoticon?
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Just use the ace image and imgzoom it:
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Dan is getting rid of me fo sure.
The commentary from judges was amazing, thank you guys 
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Originally posted by Cupid
I knew what you meant but fff girl, like it takes 10 seconds to proof-read. I just found it hilarious because ming is slang for ugly |
Ugh, I was just typing clearly and I added the line because I thought it was too short, but then, I didn't proofread it
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Originally posted by CrazyCat
Dan is getting rid of me fo sure.
The commentary from judges was amazing, thank you guys |
I just have to save someone tho
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