So I wrote this in like 5 mins I'm trying to get back into writing. Tell me what you guys think.
"I was drowning in a sea of chains
But I broke free of all the pain
Then I flew away to a burning church
Where the stars had healed me of my hurt"
your use of imagery was inspiring, I really felt the pain of you fleeing to a burning church, the ultimate sacrifice. meter was on point, and I like how you circle back into a sense of "healing". i like how you used nature too 8/10
your use of imagery was inspiring, I really felt the pain of you fleeing to a burning church, the ultimate sacrifice. meter was on point, and I like how you circle back into a sense of "healing". i like how you used nature too 8/10
22 pages in 5 hours For someone who likes to read every page of threads, I may have to make an exception. Can any past contestants tell me whether they read every page?
22 pages in 5 hours For someone who likes to read every page of threads, I may have to make an exception. Can any past contestants tell me whether they read every page?
28. mxtthewdelrey
19 of those 22 pages are Temporal and Swiftie calling each other fat and cackling about it