[Buyonce1814]

Originally posted by conatus

I did the same. Let's start a revolution.

Lets! A Janet Jackson type movement

Daydreamin

I wear a short red dress (check)
Reveal a bit of chest (check)
I flick you with my hair every time I walk past (check)

[Lukey]

Everyone struggling or writing risky songs and I'm here trying my hardest and will still flop harder

[Buyonce1814]

Originally posted by JustLuke

Everyone struggling or writing risky songs and I'm here trying my hardest and will still flop harder

I'd kii if the two comeback queens got eliminated the same week

[Lukey]

I want to send my song to Connor but I know he's just going to be the first person who'll literally tear it to shreds and make me feel like utter ****.

[Buyonce1814]

My song should feature Lil Connie tbh. Missy and Da Brat who?

[Lukey]

Also, Buyonce, I dont want to send another PM just for this, but I changed one line in a verse, it was the job line, I think it felt a bit basic, so I replaced it... With another basic.

The memories drilled into my skull
My life's a monotone narration
Walking through life, colours so dull
Should have built a better foundation

[Buyonce1814]

I think it's better

[Lukey]

Okay good

[conatus]

Originally posted by JustLuke

I want to send my song to Connor but I know he's just going to be the first person who'll literally tear it to shreds and make me feel like utter ****.

If you can't take the criticism, write something better in the first place.

Originally posted by Buyonce1814

My song should feature Lil Connie tbh. Missy and Da Brat who?

50k for a verse, no album out.

[Hugamari]

Good morning, friends~

[Pecinta Mariah]

oh I like the challenge, wish I was still a contestant here

[Lukey]

Originally posted by conatus

If you can't take the criticism, write something better in the first place.





50k for a verse, no album out.

I like constructive criticism, not "It's all crap"

[Temporal]

Originally posted by GotSkill

you can have it when a guy texts you this the night after your first magical kiss

Hate u even more, but I think I made my song work

Glad to know I'm not the only struggling though

[Aurora]

I think I just wrote the first verse and pre-chorus that I'm happy with. It's an interesting approach as it's not as lyrically strong as my usual style but I'm not really using any cliches either as it's all just truth.

[conatus]

Originally posted by JustLuke

I like constructive criticism, not "It's all crap"

I give constructive criticism you little bitch!

[conatus]

Not everyone worrying about their song when I literally submitted a ****ing rap.

[Aurora]

Buy, Clarkson, Connor, if I send you my verse that I just wrote would you read it and tell me what you think?

EDIT: anyone online really pls I need verification that I'm not ****ing myself over here

[conatus]

Sure thing, henny!

[BlueM]

Originally posted by JustLuke

I want to send my song to Connor but I know he's just going to be the first person who'll literally tear it to shreds and make me feel like utter ****.

you can send it to me

[BlueM]

Originally posted by Pecinta Mariah

oh I like the challenge, wish I was still a contestant here

I feel you