Alright, I said that I would offer hints when I was done sending in my stuff, and, if nothing else, I am a man of my word.
1) Your entry is a solid one, but there are errors in the actual entry that Matty would never make.
2) I would have loved to have taken part in your challenge myself. It is a bit challenging, though.
3) Honestly, your challenge feels a bit TOO much like an ANTM challenge, if that makes sense.
4) This challenge also may be a bit too difficult for your average ANTM contestant, but then, if they couldn't complete it, they wouldn't deserve to be a Top Member in the first place.
5) Your challenge would be quite the refreshing one, but there is one visible flaw that would have to be worked on immediately.
I had a particularly difficult time ranking 2 through 4 in this challenge, as I had all three at #2, at one point. Difficult round to judge.