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Originally posted by Truth Teller
This is actually your second best entry after Castle Of Dreams. I liked the vocabulary, the overall intensity and the pace of it! Your only problem might be that you wasted a little bit of time in the bootcamp with entries that weren't up to par, so your return to form comes during a time when every other contestant is bringing it HARD with powerful standout lines, daring concepts and advanced metaphors. If you had submitted this during round 3 or 4, you'd have ranked a bit higher, but now I feel like your entry was overshadowed. Which isn't necessarily your fault of course, but this is what happened.
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I keep on improving because every entry of mine is my second best after CoD... So this is better than Devil's Grin, which was better than Wrecked Inside.
What I need to figure out now is how to up my game so I don't get overshadowed next week
Verses are easier for me to write tho. My pre and post-choruses almost always slay and my bridges are hit or miss.
And I really appreciate your feedback as always 
