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Discussion: Let's create a song (a SMASH) | Title: We're Alive
Member Since: 8/17/2011
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i don't want to wait any longer the night is young and there is a lot of time for us so come into me!
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Member Since: 4/24/2011
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Babe, babe, babe, i really want ya, but I don't know If ya-ya-ya-ya want me, ma-a-a-a-aybe you want my body, i'm no bitch, drink tha tea, you have to sit and wait your turn yeah
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Member Since: 2/11/2008
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Your lines are funny as hell, but are really good.
I'll somehow put them together to see what we've got whit all your lines.
Keep writing!
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Member Since: 8/17/2011
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rihanna sis take a look at this
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Member Since: 12/3/2010
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I want your body on t-t-top of mine,
Sometime intimate between 6 and 9.
I want you to come-come-come into me in a space
Where we'll always stay intertwined.
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Member Since: 8/17/2011
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you know just how to make me feel right you know i like it like that
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Member Since: 10/14/2011
Posts: 1,200
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Quote:
Originally posted by freebitch26
rihanna sis take a look at this
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Member Since: 8/17/2011
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come into my soul come into my body just come into me
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Member Since: 8/17/2011
Posts: 15,807
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Quote:
Originally posted by THERihFan
Babe, babe, babe, i really want ya, but I don't know If ya-ya-ya-ya want me, ma-a-a-a-aybe you want my body, i'm no bitch, drink tha tea, you have to sit and wait your turn yeah
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i see some rihanna tease
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Member Since: 11/1/2011
Posts: 1,846
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Right there baby, that's the way
Let's *** out and celebrate
Come into me, come into me
If life's just a party
Come and get down, get down, real naughty
Come into me, Come into me
Show me all kinds of insanity
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Member Since: 5/6/2011
Posts: 26,891
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Tell me if you hard enough baby.
So you can....
COME I-I-I-I-INTO ME-E-E-E *dubstep breakdown*
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Member Since: 10/14/2007
Posts: 6,827
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Kiss me
Lick me
Touch me
Hold me
Seduce me, baby
And come into me
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Member Since: 2/11/2008
Posts: 10,964
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Intro?
oh yeah baby come in to me!
Deep deep deep d-d-deep inside intooo meee!
Show me all kinds of insanity!
Verses?
oh yeah baby make me come alive
i want that good feeling that you give me
come in to me! come in to me! come in to me-eh-eh!
tell me all your pleasures, i wanna make your dreams come true
i will take you to a place you have never been before
so give it to me, make me come alive
come into me!! come into me!! come into me-eh-eh
Don't Come Into Me Yet
Just Wait awhile
I'm very young
I don't want a child
We might not see the sun
But I will make u come
(Come into me, come into me, come into me)
Summer after highschool when you come into me
tell me all your desires, i wanna set you on fiyah
i will take you to a place you have never been before
so give it to me make me come alive
come into me!! come into me!! come into me-eh-eh
i don't want to wait any longer
the night is young and there is a lot of time for us
so come into me!
Babe, babe, babe, i really want ya,
but I don't know If ya-ya-ya-ya want me,
ma-a-a-a-aybe you want my body
i'm no bitch, drink tha tea,
you have to sit and wait your turn yeah
I want your body on t-t-top of mine,
Sometime intimate between 6 and 9.
I want you to come-come-come into me in a space
Where we'll always stay intertwined.
Right there baby, that's the way
Let's *** out and celebrate
Come into me, come into me
If life's just a party
Come and get down, get down, real naughty
Come into me, Come into me
Show me all kinds of insanity
Bridge?
We even might die, but we die happily
Come into me, Come into me
Heaven it's a place, a mystery
Come into me, Come into me
I got what you wanna see
Just come into me
come into my soul
come into my body
just come into me
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Member Since: 6/28/2008
Posts: 4,530
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I'm the bottle you're the cork
Come into me you better work
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Member Since: 2/11/2008
Posts: 10,964
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Quote:
Originally posted by Mickey
I'm the bottle you're the cork
Come into me you better work
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This one maybe it'd fit in the collabo rap part of the song.
Let's order it now!
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Member Since: 5/6/2011
Posts: 26,891
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Quote:
Originally posted by D/X
Intro?
oh yeah baby come in to me!
Deep deep deep d-d-deep inside intooo meee!
Show me all kinds of insanity!
Verses?
oh yeah baby make me come alive
i want that good feeling that you give me
come in to me! come in to me! come in to me-eh-eh!
tell me all your pleasures, i wanna make your dreams come true
i will take you to a place you have never been before
so give it to me, make me come alive
come into me!! come into me!! come into me-eh-eh
Don't Come Into Me Yet
Just Wait awhile
I'm very young
I don't want a child
We might not see the sun
But I will make u come
(Come into me, come into me, come into me)
Summer after highschool when you come into me
tell me all your desires, i wanna set you on fiyah
i will take you to a place you have never been before
so give it to me make me come alive
come into me!! come into me!! come into me-eh-eh
i don't want to wait any longer
the night is young and there is a lot of time for us
so come into me!
Babe, babe, babe, i really want ya,
but I don't know If ya-ya-ya-ya want me,
ma-a-a-a-aybe you want my body
i'm no bitch, drink tha tea,
you have to sit and wait your turn yeah
I want your body on t-t-top of mine,
Sometime intimate between 6 and 9.
I want you to come-come-come into me in a space
Where we'll always stay intertwined.
Right there baby, that's the way
Let's *** out and celebrate
Come into me, come into me
If life's just a party
Come and get down, get down, real naughty
Come into me, Come into me
Show me all kinds of insanity
Bridge?
We even might die, but we die happily
Come into me, Come into me
Heaven it's a place, a mystery
Come into me, Come into me
I got what you wanna see
Just come into me
come into my soul
come into my body
just come into me
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Where's my dubstep breakdown?
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Member Since: 11/1/2011
Posts: 1,846
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Rap Break by Nicki Minaj (Fast)
Upside down
Shake me to the ground
Round and round, round and round
Make me scream
Li-li-lick my cream
Fullfill my fantasy
Come into me, Come nice and slow
We do it once, and twice, and we do it some more
If you can't handle it, just gimme the ****
'Cause i'm your queen and I can be your king
(added by Mickey)
I'm the bottle you're the cork
Come into me you better work
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Member Since: 11/13/2009
Posts: 25,902
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I LOVE this! and the summer line from The One That Got Away
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Member Since: 11/1/2011
Posts: 1,846
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We could make a songwriting team!
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Member Since: 4/6/2011
Posts: 10,635
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Why am i not surprised that the Navy are contributing the most to such a song tiled "*** into Me?"
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