[DvnR]

The anticipation...

[Vulps]

Girls, girls, girls
I just can't say no
Never see 'em coming
I just watch them go

[Evun]

She's arriving.

She lost so much weight since the year began.

She's ready to slay our poor souls with the new era.

The haters aren't ready.

[Vulps]

Take it to the Base bb.Or here.

[Matty]

ATRL's Next
topmember
Cycle 7

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EPISODE 7: WHO ARE YOU / PERSONALITY

Guest Judge: None



THE COMMENTS

VULPS

Originally posted by mockingjay

"let's get this over with." a very negative way to start out your entry... but the rest was great. haha. i TOTALLY get what you mean about avoiding people/eye contact like a game of pokémon! lmao. also, decisive? or indecisive? i'd say the latter... as for the "WARD" thing... not really crucial to the challenge that you pointed it out, but i'm glad you did. from julian to julian, good work. you really let your personality shine through here.

Originally posted by Deuces.

I like your entry. A photo of you would have been cool but I understand. Not the most creative but I'm pleased.

Originally posted by Katie

informative, yet overkill. Top members can express themselves precisely.

Originally posted by Childish Redbino

*no comments this week*

Originally posted by Matty

I don’t know, while reading your entry the entire thing just felt awkward. You mentioned expressing who you are is not your cup of tea, and I could sense that while reading it. I got a sense of who you were, but yet there was something lacking that I could not put my finger on. I did like the creativeness of the use of WARD in your entry, though.

EVUN

Originally posted by mockingjay

it seemed a little simplistic compared to some of the other entries, and it left me wanting a bit more, but it was incredibly creative. i like the adjectives you chose, i just wish you could have expanded on some of them a bit more. still, your entry stands out and for good reason. not bad. not bad.

Originally posted by Deuces.

Creative but not enough.

Originally posted by Katie

creative, but not very detailed.

Originally posted by Childish Redbino

*no comments this week*

Originally posted by Matty

I really liked your entry. It was short and sweet but yet who you were. You mentioned those were your eyes, but I wish you chose to show all of you. I liked the creativity of it all and with all the adjectives I just felt like I knew you.

THEGEOKING

Originally posted by mockingjay

while i do appreciate the honesty of your entry and i do see where you're coming from, i have to wonder why you joined a competition in which the goal is to NOT blend in with the crowd... if that's what you really want i have to question whether this competition is right for you. or are you possibly trying to break out of that shell?

Originally posted by Deuces.

I like your entry. It really gives me a sense of you.

Originally posted by Katie

Good entry, but not as creative as I would like.

Originally posted by Childish Redbino

*no comments this week*

Originally posted by Matty

You remind me a lot of myself to be perfectly honest. I loved how honest you were with your adjectives. Usually people would be afraid, especially in a competition, to list things like shy and fearful, but they are adjectives that truly represent someone. Obviously I would have liked to see a photo of you, but you explained your Google image well.

DVNR

Originally posted by mockingjay

are you sure you didn't just choose this pic because you're wet in it? trying to get sex appeal points? all in all, your entry was simple and to the point, which worked for it. i felt it was missing the it-factor that you need at this point in the competition, but i don't think you're in danger of going home either. your formatting was pleasing to the eyes.

Originally posted by Deuces.

Great picture. It's nice to see you in your own environment and not just looking at an avatar. You seem like a fun person to be around.

Originally posted by Katie

perfect photo choice, explanations, and layout

Originally posted by Childish Redbino

*no comments this week*

Originally posted by Matty

The gloss of the flash makes it look like you are all soaped up haha! I enjoyed your entry. Your picture matched your adjectives. My only critique, they are all pretty much the same thing. You are a fun guy but is there anything else to you?

AMMER

Originally posted by mockingjay

"Sophistication. Classy. Mature. Outgoing. Fun." which does not belong? answer: sophistication. reason: it's a noun, not an adjective like the rest. you should have written "sophisticated" instead. but... i'm not going to nitpick too much. that's only a minor gripe. you chose a nice picture with you staring right into the camera. great way to connect to the judges, etc. the text of your entry could have been better crafted to be more appealing, but you gave a good effort. not your best, but good. still, at this point in the competition you can't afford to give us anything less than a stunning entry. this fell a little short of the mark.

Originally posted by Deuces.

Nice entry. You seem like a very mature person who knows how to handle life in a mannered way. Nice entry

Originally posted by Katie

great entry.

Originally posted by Childish Redbino

*no comments this week*

Originally posted by Matty

Throughout the challenges you have proven yourself to be sophisticated, classy, and mature. It was nice to get a few new adjectives from you, being fun and outgoing. Honestly though, I don’t see fun and outgoing from the picture you provided. If it’s just truly your stare at the camera then I’m sorry about this comment, but you look drunk. It was a nicely explained entry though.

QUIQUI4EVA

Originally posted by mockingjay

first thing's first... that second pic was a bit too big. could have used a resizing to fit on the forum better. good pic though. your entry was lengthy but generally well-composed. you do have very strict parents, though. it's unfortunate that you had to get whipped into shape, but too much sarcasm from children really gets parents angry, as you found out. overall, there were some things you could have done to be more concise, but i enjoyed your entry. you're very sure of yourself, and in this competition that's what we need to see.

Originally posted by Deuces.

I love your entry. THe photos are great and you really described yourself. Good job this round!

Originally posted by Katie

fun, but not an entry that really sticks with me.

Originally posted by Childish Redbino

*no comments this week*

Originally posted by Matty

To be perfectly honest, I started to get bored and starting skimming or skipping a bunch of stuff because it was so long. I eventually went back to re-read, but it was so long. Now I can hear the response now “remember Ammer’s long essay for his top 5 of 2012…” There is a difference from what he did to what you did. His was a story that captured you in, this just felt like, well, an essay. I do truly appreciate all the pictures capturing your adjectives. I ended up really focusing on your pictures with your adjectives and less on your wording. Some of the images were a little too big so they could have been resized, but a picture speaks a thousand words so with all the photos you could have said a little less.

Now it's time to figure out who is going home... in the next post




Fierce and Love
- Matty

[Evun]

So it goes.

[DvnR]

Wait

[Evun]

Originally posted by DvnR

Wait

You might win this round, BB.

[Mellark]

I'll join, put me in that Sign-up sheet.

[DvnR]

Originally posted by Evun

You might win this round, BB.

Nah, Ammer got it easily.



I was reacting to who I think is going home now.

[DvnR]

Originally posted by Mellark

I'll join, put me in that Sign-up sheet.

Page 198

Just a few days late.

[Evun]

Originally posted by DvnR

Nah, Ammer got it easily.



I was reacting to who I think is going home now.

I voted for you as Best. Don't count yourself out.

Who do you think will go home?

[Vulps]

A-whoops.

[Evun]

Most people's reactions were so mixed.

[Matty]

I'm having flashbacks from Episode 2 between Owl and Quiqui... I just dunno

[Evun]

Originally posted by Matty

I'm having flashbacks from Episode 2 between Owl and Quiqui... I just dunno

Keep me. I want it more and try harder. And you can't deny that I bring something different every time.

[DvnR]

Originally posted by Matty

I'm having flashbacks from Episode 2 between Owl and Quiqui... I just dunno

**** everything. Matty JUST PULL DE TRIGGAH PULL DE TRIGGAH PULL DE TRIGGAH BOOM

[Evun]

Originally posted by Matty

I'm having flashbacks from Episode 2 between Owl and Quiqui... I just dunno

Or just don't eliminate anyone this week since we skipped so many rounds due to people leaving.

[Matty]

Originally posted by DvnR

**** everything. Matty JUST PULL DE TRIGGAH PULL DE TRIGGAH PULL DE TRIGGAH BOOM

Okay Devin, you're eliminated

That just made things so much more easier

[DvnR]

Originally posted by Matty

Okay Devin, you're eliminated

That just made things so much more easier

If you eliminate me, I'm uploading the pictures.