[conatus]

Originally posted by posh

I'm going to be at work during the comeback results.

Good luck to everyone that submitted, though!

You know you won, don't even try it, bitch.

[Golden]

Originally posted by dwuw

You're the only one who dislikes my song, tho.

Your song in its current state would not make it to the next round.

[Stark]

Your ghost is around, voices in my head;
and, I won't lie, I wish I was dead.
Empty view, the room's all in red.

[...]

"I'd take a bullet for you" but I took the gun instead

Do you think the red line comes across as representing blood?

[conatus]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

Legend X stans in 2011 teas. 4 years later and still no successful solo single or album. Good luck cactus

Except I'm delivering quality material consistently. Hew else is still yet to leave the top 10?



Inb4 I'm #11 this week.

[Stark]

Originally posted by conatus

Is that why Crystalline has the second-highest score of the whole season? Higher than 4 of the #1s? Oh wait.

The judges are biased to me

[conatus]

Originally posted by dwuw

Do you think the red line comes across as representing blood?

It makes me think of the room as wearing a red dress.

[conatus]

Originally posted by dwuw

The judges are biased to me

At least you have the excuse to fall back on of English not being your first language when you flop.

[posh]

Originally posted by conatus

You know you won, don't even try it, bitch.

Have you seen some of the other entries? There are some really good songs - the competition is strong!

[conatus]

Put my little red party dress on...

[Golden]

'But I took the gun instead'

The hell you mean 'took'? Did she take the gun to borrow it for a few days? Did she steal the gun? Did she take the gun out for a date?

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by posh

I'm going to be at work during the comeback results.

Good luck to everyone that submitted, though!

What time do you get off?

[Buyonce1814]

Originally posted by dwuw

Was the song that forgettable?

It was uninspired, ripped off Madonna and written on the morning ride to work whilst I was curing a hangover of some sorts. But here it is if you're interested.

Mama Dont Weep

Time to calmly take off my gloves
I know that your God will not love
The way that I am but I can’t help it
I never fit in with the other boys
Never played with the same toys
I’m finding this hard to admit

Oh subconsciously
You should have known 'bout me
Read the signs easily
As it was plain to see
That I never felt like the rest
Always differently dressed
This isn’t a childish protest
Need to get it off my chest

I can't even know what to say
You say it's a choice, But I'm afraid…
It's not a choice, it's something in my genes,
so please…

Papa don't preach
I'm in love so deep
Mama don't weep
He is good to me
Don't mean to speak out of line
But I'm in love with my baby
Oh
Papa don't preach
I'm in love so deep
Mama don't weep
He is good to me
Don't mean to speak out of line
But I'm in love with my baby
I'm gonna stay with my baby, mmm.

How will you react, Oh God I was afraid.
Put my life on hold and I would evade
I couldn’t be the real me
Always battled with how to tell you
This big secret that I’ve held on to
It’s time to set myself free

Oh subconsciously
You should have known 'bout me
Read the signs easily
As it was plain to see
That I never felt like the rest
Always differently dressed
This isn’t a childish protest
Need to get it off my chest

Never was the one to play boyish games
Why do this make you feel ashamed?
No need to be sad, or mad, it’s not a disease.
So please…

Papa don't preach
I'm in love so deep
Mama don't weep
He is good to me
Don't mean to speak out of line
But I'm in love with my baby
Oh
Papa don't preach
I'm in love so deep
Mama don't weep
He is good to me
Don't mean to speak out of line
But I'm in love with my baby
I'm gonna stay with my baby, mmm.

I’m still the same boy that you raised
I’m still your child, I have not changed
This does not mean we can’t be friends
Why can’t you just accept?

Papa don't preach
I'm in love so deep
Mama don't weep
He is good to me
Don't mean to speak out of line
But I'm in love with my baby
Oh
Papa don't preach
I'm in love so deep
Mama don't weep
He is good to me
Don't mean to speak out of line
But I'm in love with my baby
I'm gonna stay with my baby, mmm.

[posh]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

What time do you get off?

I get off at 4:30, and get home around 5.

[Stark]

Originally posted by Golden

'But I took the gun instead'

The hell you mean 'took'? Did she take the gun to borrow it for a few days? Did she steal the gun? Did she take the gun out for a date?

It's a double meaning:

• She took a gun and killed someone because her lover forced her.
• She took a gun and killed herself.

[Truth Teller]

Buy, fix the collapse cause I'm dying to read it

Make it Mama Dont Weep without the apostrophe

[Golden]

Originally posted by dwuw

It's a double meaning:

• She took a gun and killed someone because her lover forced her.
• She took a gun and killed herself.

So vague and obscure. I don't like it.

[conatus]

Mama, don't weep!
I'm in trouble deep!

[Truth Teller]

Papa Don't Preach is one of my all time favorite pop songs

It's just perfect

Too bad I can't sing along given that I don't have ovaries

[Buyonce1814]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

Buy, fix the collapse cause I'm dying to read it

Make it Mama Dont Weep without the apostrophe

Nnn ok thanks

Remember it's just a mess and a joke. Nothing serious .

[Stark]

Originally posted by Golden

So vague and obscure. I don't like it.

Vague? Please

You don't like anything