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Originally posted by Inner Insanity
Those are so obvious though.  People really don't like it when you think outside the box. Like, did you even read my little story?
Whatever. Guess I'm out for creativity.
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I kinda have to agree with Ryan, I mean, you wrote about those elderly men going out to have fun and messing around, when in fact they are sitting on that bench, looking somewhat sad/lost in thought, like they are contemplating about their lives

You definitely were creative, but the story does not exactly match the pic.