[quote]TT's review.[quote]
Sorry for disappointing you
I wanted to write at least one "hook" song for this competition and I figured that this was my best chance, so I went all out...
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But the worst thing was the transition of them being mushy gushy to you being mushy gushy.
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Do you mean the singer of the song as "you" or the subject "you" in the second chorus? For the second chorus, I tried to use the hook in a flashback setting, but the final chorus, I tried to play with the hook and interpret it in a different way. Mushy gushy means romantic and I tried to use that as literally affectionate in the first chorus and as in the context of the literary era of Romanticism in the second and last choruses, which dealt with idealism, melodrama, and supernatural occurrences. So other people are affectionate, the target of the song was an idealist, and the singer of the song is sentimental. I understand I didn't develop that well enough and stretched my formula too far this week. If I get a second chance, I'm going to turn in a stronger body of work, for sure! Thanks TT
Congratulations, guys.
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I knew I had a reason to believe in you! 
Congratulations to everyone hired!
