As fragile as petals of the rose
scattered unsteadily
When I hold myself back
I get myself injured by the twilight
Hopefully the rose is guarded
crowned by the morning’s dew
when you are here
finally the faith in me is pulled through
Finally I found you
when I embrace with time
luckily I found you
never stop to have me
until the end of time
As calm as expanse of ocean
with the chirping seagulls
that will not stop singing
When I lay daydreaming
I fantasize ‘bout you and only you
I will carve
One story about us
Where good and bad
Summed up beautifully
Where black and white
Swathed in the warmth of love
And if all materialized
I will always be by your side
Quote:
Originally posted by Pecinta Mariah
Verse:
I asked you to sing.
So you sang a song for me.
The words were so sweet.
I didn’t care that you were off-key.
And the melody of your song
Has been in my head all night long
And I. Can't. Sleep.
Pre-Chorus:
I'm wide-eyed and foolish—
I don't normally do this.
But I'm lying in bed awake
Hoping you'll tap on my window
And take my away
Chorus:
As the moon is drifting across the sky
I can't stop thinking about your eyes
Can't stop thinking about your smile
And baby I. Can't. Sleep.
The stars are glistening overhead
I can't stop thinking of the words you said
I’m tossing and turning in this empty bed
No baby, I. Can't. Sleep.
Verse:
I asked for a dance.
So you took me out on the floor.
You moved so beatifically.
‘Cause you had something worth dancing for.
I can see our future will be so bright
I’m ready now to give love one more try
And I. Can't. Sleep.
Pre-Chorus/Chorus
Bridge:
See the way I feel is ineffable—
I can’t find the right words to say!
Our love is gonna be infallible—
I dream about you all night
Daydream about you all daaaa*whistle note*aaay!
Chorus (+outro)
We all dream to find something to stabilise
The overwhelming actualities life doesn’t advertise
Thoughtlessly I glamorized what we were meant to be
We became a joke and love satirised you and me
Hate what is evil; cling to what is good.
Yet our love was unable to withstand like it should
Love is patient, love is kind, Corinthian said
Foolishly I walked in blind, rationality fled
Honestly, I can tell you I gave you all I had
Never expected our love to turn sour and go bad
Where did we go wrong or were we never ever right?
Two lovers underground our sparks set the cave alight
Was it me? What did I do? Or were you in the wrong
I don’t understand. We were supposed to be forever strong
I shouldn't have walked down that altar impetuously
I shouldn't have said I love you vibrantly
I shouldn't have forgiven you habitually
I should’ve left the first time your eye wandered, aimlessly.
I shouldn’t have pissed you off continuously
Maybe I should stop seeking love desperately
Because I always seem to rush into things hedonistically
And become a victim of senseless bastards who are so unworthy of loving me
Quote:
Originally posted by Pecinta Mariah
I am out of inspiration,
so this is a confession,
of my love for you, my darling
Even though we are divorcing,
sooner than you may think
we won't easily sink
down the obliviousness of the ocean
that inspires my portion
of our broken illusion
Furthermore in our hearts
rhapsodizing moments still empathize
with an inherent delusion
of our missunderstood confusion
regarding our stigmatized nights
This is all I could think of,
so I better log off.
Hugs and kisses fellow lambs,
I hope you give me overwhelming likes.
Byebye.
1st verse
The day goes by, it’s quickly gone
I join the crowd, I’m not alone
but in the night when I’m back home
I realize I’m on my own
I’m left without a place to hide
when fears I’ve long withheld inside
locked in dark corners of my mind
break loose and forcefully collide
Chorus
Once I’ve pulled through another pointless day
tears overtake till the smile fades away
When I’m alone with the lights all turned down
the mask wears out and it falls to the ground
2nd verse
The day goes by, I’m standing tall
but when the night begins to fall
and shadows play upon the wall
suppressed dilemmas take their toll
Old demons I could never fight
emerge at night and reunite
unravel at the speed of light
and swiftly they slip out of sight
Chorus
Bridge
I hopelessly search for a cure
for hurt and pain I can’t endure
My voice is all drowned out
by numbing doubt
I’m burning out
I place my hope in morning light
to break the overbearing night
Composure’s hard to keep
I’m losing sleep
I’m losing me
Chorus
Quote:
Originally posted by Pecinta Mariah
I'll take it as a compliment
thanks
That would be mine
thanks again
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Now sistrens and for all song-writing critics
time to use your authority to review and give scores
The scoring must be like this
and no trolling please (especially you BeBe)
If anyone (beside the contestants) wants to give score/review, feel free to do so
I'm gonna divide the score into 2 categories:
The Lambily scores and The Critics Score