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and still making a Fame Story
Change my mind.. gonna make new ones..
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You need to update this now....
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I have Jimmy's that means I'm gonna update soon so Jay do you have yours?
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The Love Game | Week 2/Part 1: Vote for Couple of the Week!
Hosted by: Matty
Co-hosted by: JimMyxcoRe
"The people have spoken and your heart has been broken... Goodbye!"
  EVAN & Ragua [withdrew]
RECAP: We saw Angelique & Victor get Couple of the Week and were immune from elimination. Ragua withdrew from the competition cause he didn't want to answer questions, and the other to be eliminated was Evan because people didn't like how he'd spend his money if he was rich. This week we'll be seeing how creative your minds are by writing short stories based on the love and fame. Lets first review the rule for Part 1 of this week...
COUPLES (LOVE): The viewers and members of ATRL will then pair up one contestant from each side whos answers seemed to match and were the most loved answers. The two that get the most votes will win "Couple of the Week" and will not be up for elimination.
LOVE QUESTION:
Write a short "LOVE" story...
THE ANSWERS:
LOVE: - MARK (rihannar0x8)
John always wanted to be a singer. He worked at a restaurant called Elens, and sang their, but one day a producer from Def Jam came to eat at the restaurant, and John happened to be singing. He loved Johns voice, and thought he could even be the next Justin Timberlake! He called John over, and asked him to fly over to LA w/ him to discuss a record deal. They flew to LA and signed John right away. John was so happy, and the next day he met Rihanna! And within two months, he married her!
- VICTOR (Hilary & Rock)
Jenny was a smart beautiful and smart businesswoman that hadn't have good luck in her romantic life, because none of the guys who dated her wanted a serious relationship, all of them wanted sex...one night she was driving trough the hallway to an important job interview, when her car broke down, she tried to waved to a lot of drivers to get help but none of them helped her, suddenly an awesome black ferrari, parked right after her car and a tall, handsome man stepped out of it, he was really nice and helped her to repair the car an offered her a date that night which she accepted...anyways after the date they become a couple and lived happily ever after...THE END
- FLASHING LIGHTS
Once, there was 19 year old guy by the name of Jake who lost his mother to cancer when he was 12. He vowed to never let his month down and to meet the right woman. One day, he met the girl who he eventually feel in love with. Her name and Christina, and from the moment they saw each other, it was love at first sight. However, Christina suffered from dwarfism, meaning that she only stood three feet tall. He didn't care at all. All he cared about was spending the rest of his life with her. One day, Christina told Jake that she was pregnant, and despite being nervous at first, they went through it, and had their baby by the name of Chris. Chris is currently a year old, and the happy couple are as in love as they never were before.
- CHRISX
Our love was a fire. A heated glow rising from the earth and we burnt for what seemed like eternity. But then it rained. It poured forever. And there was no water extinguisher. The ashes of our flame spread far and wide and every time I travel, these haunting memories of the past would make me tremble.
Now as I sit in my room, windows closed, hot and boiling with anxiety something hits me. And it's love. Not from him or any other. But from myself. It's self-love. Me, myself and I. Because I know if I can't get yours I'll always have my heart - flaming forever.
- NELLY
Decided to sit this week out 
- RIGEL (UNUSUALBOY)
Well maybe this ain’t the best love story but I like it, I fell in love with a friend of mine that lives in Uk, we are so close and we really enjoy chatting by msn because since we live so far away it’s the only way we can be in touch, we wrote poems, we spent hours talking by msn and never thought that I could fall in love with someone like that, we don’t have secrets, it’s like a never met somebody like this that I could tell all my secrets and trust in me in that way, actually even I know that we live kind of far away I have the faith that some day we can finally meet us, face to face and that my friend can know all the love that I feel, this might be impossible and crazy just for falling in love of someone by internet and that’s what people say to me but I know that when we really wish and love something like this can turn real so I won’t give up.
- VIXIE
This is a story of a girl who is in love with a scarecrow
she loves to spend the day watching his cold eyes,
and by the night all she want is dream with his kisses,
but one sad day when she woke up...and her father burned the scarecrow whit an evil laugh
She ran and took an axe... SLASHHHHH!
theres blood everywhere and daddy´s head is on the floor.
The starving crows are watching her with angry
and they ate her eyes,,,
In the middle of the darkness the girl is dancing with his love...
- JIMMY (co-host)
This story starts in a place where the stars are impossible to reach and the dreams are in black and white... a little town in California. It's the year 1985 and all the people is recovering of a deathly Earthquake 2 weeks ago.
In the middle of the mess, destruction and chaos a kid with shine in his eyes is playing the guitar and singing while the people is throwing him coins and applauses... His name is Jimmy.
The enviroment in her family is heavy and dark, full of negativity and frustation. His father Joseph is an adamant person who hides scars from the past with his pride, her mother Marie a sweet woman who is abused by his husband; Jimmy is the first of 3 kids and has 2 sisters: Virginia and Rox.
Jimmy wants to be a biggest star and that's his dream but his father is insecure and is not supporting him, Joseph lost his legs because he has some complications with diabetes . Jimmy is playing the guitar because he need money to buy medicine for her sister Virginia who needs an open-heart surgery, his mother can't work because of her husband pride and Jimmy is at the front of the family as the big brother. Rox was rapped in the school and is pregnant, her father inmediatly slapped her in the face and she went down, the family is almost broken.
Virginia is the only member in the house supporting Jimmy's dream, everyday she pray to god for her family and her brother's dream, -"Can you play the song that I love, I want to hear it before fall asleep" she said, Jimmy started to play the song and then her heart just stopped at the middle of the song, it was a hard moment in Jimmy's life. In her funeral Jimmy's head starts racing mixed feelings and all the moments when his sister said: -"Reach your dreams, Don't stop!, you can do it, never say never", then he removed the tears and went to his house, took the guitar and all the money... Then he looked back and left a letter in the door.
The big journey of his life started, he had a coldest night ever playing his guitar in the middle of the night, he started to play Virginia's favorite song and his tears started to fall. Next day a ray of light touched his face and woke up, the first thing he saw was a beautiful girl with green eyes, she said: "Are you okay? Hold my hand, my name is Barbara and you are outside my house, I saw you through my window when you were playing the guitar, do you want a coffee?". He accpeted and they talked for hours about each life, she found something special in him, it was love at first sight.
TO BE CONTINUED FOR THE FAME…
- OZZY (ozlovezashlee)
One day there was a young girl who was sad and lonely her name was britney spears. Britney was an international superstar, but that didnt help because what she wanted more than money and fame was LOVE. She went on a world tour and wasnt able to be with friends and family, this made britney very sad . Then one lonely night she awoke to someone knocking on her door, she wondered who it was and why were they interruping her beauty sleep. She then got up and opened the door, to her suprise it was Justin Timberlake, "Britney I cant stop thinking of you, ever since we were in the micky mouse club i liked you" justin said. " Justin i feel the same way about you, we have so much in common" Britney replied. Britney then invited Justin into her hotel room were they had a very passionate night of wild love making. From that night on Britney found her soul mate she was no longer lonely. |
FAME: KARLOSVZLA -
Was online but never sent in anything 
ANGELIQUE (BEYONCESGiirl) -
Once upon a time there was a girl named Beyonce. Beyonce was a beautiful and classy young lady. She never drank, never lied, never stole, and always had money. But there was something missing in her life. She didn't know what it was. One day she was walking down the street and ave a man. He was a sexy man. She but she knew she couldn't have him. She was walking through a construction site and one of the construction workers messed up and dropped the crane. The man ran and saved Beyonce and from then on Beyonce and her new loving, caring, kind, would neevr hurt a fly boyfriend named Chris Brown lived happily Ever after.
ERIK -
One day a boy was walking along a beach when, just for a moment, a beauty caught his eye. He stopped dead in his tracks, turned and to his surprise and delight, saw that the beauty was staring at him. He blushed, but mustered up enough courage to ask the beauty out on a date. The beauty agreed, and so started a beautiful love story, which was a like a piece of heaven. Well, until Animal Rights came to the dog's rescue and the boy was jailed for bestiality.
JAKE (HotNCold) -
We were both young when I first saw you
I close my eyes
And the flashback starts
I'm standing there
On a balcony in summer air
See the lights,
See the party,
the ball gowns
I see you make your way through the crowd
And say hello
Little did I know
That you were Romeo, you were throwing pebbles
And my daddy said stay away from Juliet
And I was crying on the staircase
Begging you please don't go, and I said
Romeo take me somewhere we can be alone
I'll be waiting all there's left to do is run
You'll be the prince and I'll be the princess
It's a love story baby just say yes
JACK (danitykanelover) -
A girl is living a great life with a boyfriend and great friends in her hometown that she has lived in from birth. Her father was then tragically injured in a car accident and was unable to work due to his condition. The girl's mother had to become the sole breadwinner for the family and to move up in the company she was already working at and make more money she had to relocate to an office with a better position available. Unfortunately that office was extremely far away and the girl was forced to leave her friends and boyfriend and had to start a completely new life. When she got to her new home and school she was not welcomed well, except by one boy. The only problem was that this boy had a girlfriend and they were one of the most well known couples in school. If this girl broke them up she would never make another friend at school. Little did she know was that he was extremely unhappy in the relationship and fell in love at first sight with the new girl. This story is about following love no matter what consequences may follow, so the girl chooses to make her move and her crush left her girlfriend for her. What happens to the newly happy couple next is for you to imagine.....
JAY (fiercE) -
There was A man named Jack who have a crush on his friend and neighbor Jane
Jack and Jane are friends since they were young, but Jack fall in love to Jane and he started asking her out
but one day Jane told Jack that they should not go together because Jane have a Crush on one of her friends Leo but no one knows that Leo is a gay and always like Jack!!
Jack is now jealous to Leo now because Jane likes him. One day the 3 went out to go somewhere to have fun and Leo noticed that Jack is jealous because He and Jane are together... Leo thinks that this is a good strategy for him.. Then Jack and Leo talked privately and Jack told what he feels about the two, and Leo told Jack that he's the one he liked not Jane..
Jack was shocked and then the two make up a deal that they will have a secret relationship once Jack and Jane is together.. so Leo talked to Jane and said what he feels to her.. Jane cried with Jack comforting her and Jane not realizing that Jack is the one who loves her..
After Three long months Jack and Jane are now a perfect couple.. but Jack and Leo have a secret relationship and no one knows it!
BORING!!!!!
The END
CINDY (Tinker) -
Once upon a time, there was a goddess and a hunter. She was beautiful and he couldn't help himself. There wasn't a single part of her he didn't wanna touch, she was leaving soon on a goddess world mission. So he did something ,kinda of crazy. AND THEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER!
RNBSUPASTAR09 -
I thought I was in love, but i guess that wasn't true. The person who claimed to love me so deeply, so truly, was nothing but a fake. Someone so cocky, arrogant, and just full of oneself. I don't know how I lasted so long. I cant understand. Was I that bling? Did love really have a blindfold over me? Could I really not see what was right in front of me? For someone to say that they loved me, wanted to bewith me forever, we would never break up, and that we will get married and share the same last name, they sure are a great performer. But they put on quite a show, really had me going. But it was time to go, curtains finally closing. That was quite a show, very entertaining. Im glad its over now. Go on and take a bow!
CRANK IT UP -
I know when we're apart,
We're always together
You're far away and I'm here
But that doesn't matter
You're the only one with the key into my heart
I know I can't see you but I feel you in my soul
No matter where we're,
We're together, unseparable
If I have to be yours,
I'll do everything at my most
I'll stand by your door
I'll wait for you under stars written,
"I Love You."
So come on over and we'll finally be together. |
VOTING ENDS
FRIDAY NOVEMBER 13th, 2009!
ATRL MEMBERS: Put your answers in here!
ATRL VIEWERS (Non/Members): Click here to vote!
Anyone can vote!
If your a contestant you can't vote for yourself! 
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Mine is like the holy bible!  OMG!!!!
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So I did a fame one for nothing? 
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Quote:
Originally posted by JimMyxcoRe
Mine is like the holy bible! OMG!!!! |
I split it into two because I'm like saving the readers from reading it...
I even made the font small so it didn't seem so overwhelming. I can't believe what you wrote can be considered a "SHORT" story...
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Originally posted by Flashing Lights
So I did a fame one for nothing? |
Its for the next part remember
I do them seperately. I ask for two questions so I don't have to keep asking day after day, cause i'm seriously about to snap at some of these people cause they were online and still didn't even make up some story just for the heck of it...
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Originally posted by Matty
I split it into two because I'm like saving the readers from reading it...
I even made the font small so it didn't seem so overwhelming. I can't believe what you wrote can be considered a "SHORT" story...
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HAHAHAHAHA IKR? I´m using this story in 2 games It´s a little bit long, hope you like it.
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Long stories should be disqualified.
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Mine is the shortest 
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My eyes hurt when reading jimmy's story..
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Quote:
Originally posted by Flashing Lights
Long stories should be disqualified. |
Mine is long because is 2 in 1, it talks about love and fame as well.
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Originally posted by fiercE
My eyes hurt when reading jimmy's story..
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Enlarge the screen or wear some magnifiers haha
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Evan is out! 
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Quote:
Originally posted by Matty
Enlarge the screen or wear some magnifiers haha |
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHHA Cruel 
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Evan is out! |
by a landslide he was voted out. I guess no one liked that he would buy cd's and gay ****...
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I don´t need gay ****, I can do other kind of things for free 
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