1. you have to let poeticism and realism work side-by-side
2. when telling a story like yours, it's best to embellish it a little
3. find your message first, then write the song around it
4. I think really the only issue I had was that it was a little wordy
5. embody your character while writing your song
6. choose one archetype or you'll just appear to others as some "dual-personality"…
7. never lose the effort in the middle of your song…
8. Be a dreamer, be a young adult, be yourself, but don't try to push it
9. how you portrayed it could've been cleaner
10. in its calamitous fashion it's not as bad as I thought
11. keep the same mindset when writing your songs
12. appreciate the song you have for what it is first, then decide whether you need to embellish it or not
13. Don't give up after the first verse; carry that strength all the way through
14 & 15. You know who you are. Please, don't let it happen again…
1. you have to let poeticism and realism work side-by-side
3. find your message first, then write the song around it
6. choose one archetype or you'll just appear to others as some "dual-personality"…
9. how you portrayed it could've been cleaner
10. in its calamitous fashion it's not as bad as I thought
Jack! hasn't responded back. I mean, I could carry on without him, but that would mean me and Huga would be your only deliberators… I have a Plan B just in case Jack! doesn't come in by tonight…
Not all these being negative You really are the Simon of this thread
None of those are negative. I look for improvement. If you look for and expect only praise, you'll never truly understand where you are in the world. Please accept that.
None of those are negative. I look for improvement. If you look for and expect only praise, you'll never truly understand where you are in the world. Please accept that.
I'm too scared to read them now, I'll just wait for the results 
You really are the Simon of this thread 
I look for improvement. If you look for and expect only praise, you'll never truly understand where you are in the world. Please accept that.
your right me sorry 
