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 This is horrible. 
2 people dislike a certain line, but one loves it.
   
 
  
 
 
  
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				That's not exactly what I meant but nnn, that does suck too. The only time I submitted early was the round I was eliminated    
			
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 nn I know, I just wanted to say that   
Sometimes I send early and sometimes I don't because SOMETIMES I can edit my song too much and find "faults" with my song when they aren't really there, so it's definitely a case of balancing two extremes    
 
  
 
 
  
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 apif;kjgagas poor JustLuke, everyone's basically telling him to scrap his entire song    
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					Originally posted by  8thPrince
					 
				 
				Hello, my name is 8thPrince! This will be my first PH game. I started songwriting in 2012, but I'm not very good at churning them out quickly.    I've only posted 3 songs I've liked on the internet. Of note about me is that I also write instrumentals and vocals to my tracks too. Only recently have I fallen in love with the actual songwriting part of song production. I'm hoping this competition will push me to write more songs.
 
About my musical palette: I can read sheet music, and play the Tuba. Classical and Modern band music has an influence on my song construction, as well as pop music. My songs fall in the spectrum of pop. I like strong rhythm, emphasis on assonance and consonance, and for each song to have an extended metaphor that ties the song together in a nice bow.
 
My actual content is inspired by romanticism: strong feelings, connections to natural occurrences, fixation on the mundane, and things being made larger than life. I also like incorporating childish and innocent imagery/themes/words in my writing.
 
I like pop music and KPop, my favorite writers are Mariah Carey, Taylor Swift,  Shinsadong Tiger, and Jun-gan Di.  
			
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 Wait let me just    
 
  
 
 
  
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				Sent. 
*breathes out sigh of relief*
   
			
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					Originally posted by  JustLuke
					 
				 
				This is horrible. 
2 people dislike a certain line, but one loves it.
   
			
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 send it to a former host/judge
   
 
  
 
 
  
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					Originally posted by  HausofNiko
					 
				 
				you'll be fine girl. 
			
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 Thanks bb, you too. 
  
 
  
 
 
  
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 dd Euphorae and TT are gonna be top 10 on the most addicted chart from their posts in this thread ALONE 
 
  
 
 
  
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					Originally posted by  GotSkill
					 
				 
				send it to a former host/judge 
  
			
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					Originally posted by  LKV.
					 
				 
				 
NAME: LKV, LastKingVanity, or drew
 PH: Randomly entered the songwriters thread and saw someone talking about a competition! So I decided to join   
SONGWRITING EXPERIENCE: None at all. I just like to vibe out and create my own ad libs to songs and stuff when I'm in the car. I like to sing, but writing my own song is something I've never attempted.
 FAVORITE SONGWRITERS: John Legend, Ryan Leslie (really only his work with Cassie), SZA, Tinashé, Jhené, and Sky Ferreira.
 FAVORITE SOUND: Love Love Love R&B, and electronic pop.  
			
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 I love Ryan Leslie too. You have good taste. Watch you win this. Hi.   
And sorry to anyone who sent me a PM, didn't expect so many messages   
I'm going through them all now but I wanna give good feedback so yeah.  
 
  
 
 
  
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 [b]Name[\b]: Moijejoue or Savannah 
 
[b]PH experience[\b]: Novice. 
 
[b]Songwriting experience[\b] : I wrote a song in the sixth grade for the girl group I was going to assemble with my then besties but we flopped and broke up before we can finish rehearsing the song. 
 
[b]Favorite Songwriters[\b]: Björk, Kate Bush, Peter Gabriel, David Bowie, Tinashe. 
 
[b]Genres[\b]: I like to be versatile and experiment. 
 
  
 
 
  
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				dd Euphorae and TT are gonna be top 10 on the most addicted chart from their posts in this thread ALONE 
			
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 I was just thinking that    Remmy ain't safe!  
 
  
 
 
  
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 Anybody else able to peek a bit at my song? 
 
  
 
 
  
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 I don't think I want a former judge to tell me the same thing. 
  
 
  
 
 
  
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 If you have a song you need looking over, I'm here! 
 
  
 
 
  
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				Anybody else able to peek a bit at my song? 
			
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 ok! just check mine out too <3  
 
  
 
 
  
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 Ugh, **** it! I won't make it to the top 10, I'll be lucky enough at #11    
 
  
 
 
  
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					Originally posted by  moijejoue
					 
				 
				Favorite Songwriters Björk, Kate Bush, Peter Gabriel, David Bowie, Tinashe. 
			
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 Bjork, Kate and Tinashe?   
Damn   
I was just rediscovering Kate's discography a few days ago. Hounds Of Love and The Sensual World are masterpieces    
 
  
 
 
  
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 Truth Teller not posting at all ever since I last submitted. 
Ohh nevermind
   
 
  
 
 
  
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 I'm just happy to be taking part. 
  
 
  
 
 
  
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					Originally posted by  Hugamari
					 
				 
				
Yeah, my PM box is open.
    
			
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 lemme send too 
   
 
  
 
 
  
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