Kelly Clarkson often gets asked about how Simon Cowell treated her on American Idol, like “was he tough on you? Did he scare you?” Kelly always answers that there was one instance where Kelly confronted him and asked why he wasn’t never particularly hard on her, and he responded that “even I were to be mean to you, I know it wouldn’t faze you because you don’t care.” That’s kind of how I feel right now. I’m sure you knew how I’d feel about this, but didn’t expect that to change. I thought this was messy, but as long as you’re happy with what you’re doing I suppose, then go for it.
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2. MattyTacos - Storm Warning
Daddy Hunter Hayes should sue u tbh. This felt like a demo tbh. You had plenty of words left to throw in a bridge or add on to the verses to make this feel more complete.
- The chorus was pretty weak, saying “I wish I could be the rain / Or an oncoming hurricane” and then jumping to “I’m your storm warning” was…off.
- “You said beauty is deceived under lights” poor use of “deceived”
- “So yours was the brightest to watchful eyes” non mi piace the use of “watchful”
I mean this wasn’t as awful as I would’ve expected (), but this entry was kinda meddling. Put more effort into it, fat.
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3. CountryBritney - Sssh
The queen returns! We’ll I definitely think you’re not debuting outside the Top 30 this season I’ll make this brief since you didn’t get to put a lot into this
- “try as you might” wasn’t needed metrically
- “liquor/her” was forced (you could’ve more creative with your rhymes overall)
- This definitely felt undeveloped overall
This was your buzz single, looking forward to your debut!
Daddy Hunter Hayes should sue u tbh. This felt like a demo tbh. You had plenty of words left to throw in a bridge or add on to the verses to make this feel more complete.
- The chorus was pretty weak, saying “I wish I could be the rain / Or an oncoming hurricane” and then jumping to “I’m your storm warning” was…off.
- “You said beauty is deceived under lights” poor use of “deceived”
- “So yours was the brightest to watchful eyes” non mi piace the use of “watchful”
I mean this wasn’t as awful as I would’ve expected (), but this entry was kinda meddling. Put more effort into it, fat.
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), but this entry was kinda meddling. Put more effort into it, fat.
I’ll make this brief since you didn’t get to put a lot into this
she's so.. special
and yet people cream themselves over it