Euphoria backtracking once I mentioned my rankings!
That was
not sarcasm, so I'll let it go this time.
*insert Sam's avi*
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Originally posted by DripDrip
What do you mean what the hell does it mean? Like let's look up the definitions of beat in the dictionary shall we????
You know like "damn these comments are so try hard to be critical, I'm beat after reading these"
But I mean okay I understand if some of us don't have Google dot com.
I mean a Fire, you know, its usually used with rage and anger in this case the rage me and the guy have so we beat each other up. We do this until the fire in us is worn out or defeated (ANOTHER DEFINITION FOR BEAT).
But okay I understand, you don't wanna take five extra seconds to try to reason something out or try to understand anything. That's fine. That's cool.
I'll just write this next week:
The grass is green
Water is wet
The sky is blue
You're so mean
I haven't met you yet
But I still love you
And get a 10/10
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Let's look it up in the dictionary and it's definition number FORTY-THREE? Hmm, no wonder it didn't spring to mind when I read the song? And it's use in the line: "We dance in bed, until that fires beat" is awkward, whether the definition is clear or not.
And instead of coming in here with your nasty ass attitude and complaining about ONE part of my critique why don't you take some time to focus on your inept songwriting?
- Start/heart - easy, predictable rhyme.
- Swing/sing - even worse.
- What is even happening in this imagery? People are fighting and fighting and then you "begin to sing"?
- "Dear" and "deer" are used at the end of the verse because they make sense together? No, because you think you're being cute with your wordplay when this pun is actually inept and unrelated to the rest of the song?
- "Chasing for you" - FOR? does that make sense or are you forcing a syllable into your tortured rhythm?
- Need I go on?
You didn't get your score because of ONE phrase I didn't understand but because the entire song was unoriginal and poorly written. So don't come in here writing me an article about what a single word means when you have WAY more problems to be concerned about.
