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Originally posted by keshaspearsxo
It is what it is
If they don't like what you got, deal with it, ex-host
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I'm sorry, did my one complaint give the impression that I am not dealing with it? I don't insert myself into these game like it's my life support; I'm playing this game like I've played all the games: for fun and interaction with like minds. That's all.
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Originally posted by Tymps.
I don't want to discourage you. We've both been involved with this game for a while and we both are well aware of some of the flaws involving the structure of this game and how you can't hear the songs. But if no section of your song repeats lyrically, that does make it less song-like. As I said in my comment, you could've helped alleviate this by having more than one appearance of the chorus.
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I understand. I sent that from my phone, so I really didn't have time to do a structure check, but even so, I didn't want to go into how I wanted my song arranged. So, even if I did do a proper arranging like I did in my recording, I still would've kept it and sent it as such because, at the end of the day, I practically gave you all the pieces and labelled which parts were the most important by their name. I really didn't want to call them Chorus 1 and Chorus 2 or Pre-Chorus 1 or Pre-Chorus 2 or have really long verses that ultimately change up the flow in the middle because on-paper (on-screen), it wouldn't look structurally sound. So, that's why there are five verses instead of a normal arrangement like two or three and one chorus that spells out the feeling of the song.
But, yeah, I could've made it more clear by repeating the chorus.
You'll have to beat me first bitch!
