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OK, let's do comments and results all in one today! 
 dwuw - Spark the Fire
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Originally posted by Gotskill
This is really fiery and fit the challenge well. There's a few lines I don't really like, such as "when I was in the ground". Wouldn't that be a reference to death? And I'm assuming you're not dead in this song. I like certain lines like "I've got no heart, I've got no soul". I feel like you filled up a lot of space with repetition, which didn't leave a lot of room for really showcasing your lyrical abilities. What was there, however, was pretty strong and I like this song more than the Taylor clones we've seen from you in the past  |
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Originally posted by Scorpio King
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Prometheus. - Ipecac
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Originally posted by GotSkill
This is the type of song I call a "high-concept song", which can either be a hit or a miss. For me it was a little of both. You had really good imagery and I loved the words you used. The only downside was that the rhymes at times seemed forced, like you were afraid of toning down the language at all. That's also a good thing though; I can tell you went all out on this, which is exactly what we want from a comeback song. I'll also admit I had to look up what Ipecac means  . |
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Originally posted by Scorpio King
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A Public Affair - Scream
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Originally posted by Gotskill
I really loved the concept and theme of this. You set it up to be a really powerful song. Unfortunately it did fall flat in that it wasn't quite as powerful as I was hoping. There were a few awkward phrases and typos scattered throughout the song which prevented me from completely LOVING the song. Always make sure to go back and edit and look for those types of things, because the judges definitely notice them.
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Originally posted by Scorpio King
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CristianGsix - Blast Off
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Originally posted by GotSkill
Much like A Public Affair's entry, I liked the concept for this a long more than the song itself. Make sure you remember to use censor bypasses because I couldn't tell what some of the strong language was supposed to be. There were a few awkward lines, like "bow down to the one crown owner". Still, at the same time, there were some pretty strong lines such as "fearless bitches aint scared of rejection" that just felt really gritty and powerful.
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And the results for the public vote
Prometheus. - Ipecac
+13
dwuw - Spark the Fire
+6
A Public Affair - Scream
+5
CristianGsix - Blast Off
+3
These scores will be counted out of 13, the highest score.
and the final scores, with judges scores counting for 50% (25% each) and public vote counting for 50% are:
Comeback Contestant
dwuw = 5.55/10
Prometheus. = 8.81/10
A Public Affair = 4.54/10
CristianGsix = 4.09/10
Everyone please welcome back into the competition,
 Prometheus.
you are the first person to make it to the top 12 
One Last Plot Twist
dwuw, as the second highest scorer, if someone happen to drop out (and actually lets me know) this next round you will be brought back in instead of bringing back the most recently eliminated contestant as usual  . So watch out for that
Round 4 results soon 
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I wanted to mean something like you were feeling down, at the bottom of the charts 
