Team 2: Bloopower - Jurassic Park
Props for the cute graphics and for picking my favorite movie of all time (citation needed?). I think that you did a great job capturing Sadness and Disgust. And I just noticed that your little dinos match the color schemes of the emotions. Did you even download and use the Jurassic Park font? Ch the dedication to small details.
Team 3: enxesong - Toy Story
A bit brief, and I think that you could have come up with more / better responses to Woody's entrance in particular.
Team 4: Danialcraft - The Avengers
I'm afraid that you failed to capture both Captain America's personality, and the voices of the Emotions.
Team 5: Amacptz - Titanic
This is very short, but it's adequate.
Team 6: Urban fail - Scream
Holy **** **** ****. Writing from the perspectives of multiple characters was such a great decision here, it really paid off for you. Really interesting to see Joy inside the mind of a psychopath, too.
Team 7: dwuwbath - Star Wars
An admirable effort.
Team 8: Gueromatic - The Hunger Games
You did a stellar job connecting each emotion to this scene, especially with the way that Sadness, Anger, and Disgust take over in quick procession following Rue's death. I certainly think that this would have been a core memory moment as well. Minus points for not referencing "Safe & Sound," my favorite song ever.
Team 14: wesley del yonce - Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone
Way too much film script, way too little of the Emotions. This scene had potential. You didn't live up to it.
Team 16: MarviDuke - The Lion King
Short, but effective. Interesting choice of scene; might have gone with Mufasa's death myself, but you did really well here. And your GIFs really add to the entry as well.
Team 20: Eog1814 - Finding Nemo
At first I was really confused, but then I saw the text that you added to the GIFs and I was like AH. You did an incredible job matching the content of the text to the content of your GIFs, and I think you did an excellent job capturing the voices of the Emotions. I'm not seeing a lot of Sadness, though...
Team 23: Legend prezli - Legally Blonde
Excellent job utilizing all of the Emotions in each moment of the scene. Very well thought out and perfectly executed!
Team 24: Theus Monster - Frozen
Um. Neither Anna nor the audience are aware that Hans is evil at this point in the film, so your dialogue kinda falls a bit flat. You didn't even comment on Kristoff's comment about foot size.
Team 26: feelslikeTiberius - The Exorcist
You did a good job capturing the voices of the Emotions, but this doesn't really feel like a standout entry for whatever reason. (Don't worry, you're still in the upper half of the entries, though). Love Anger's Hilary Duff line. LOL
Comments 2
Superpower & Bloomers:
I applaud you both for choosing to do the emotions that would going through a T-Rex’s head. You didn’t go with the easy people emotions that was practically all fear. You created a dialogue that would best give examples all five emotions through the use of a character that essentially didn’t do much. You gave it more life. It was cute and I liked it.
Enxe & Lovesong:
It was nice; short and sweet. I was actually reading the dialogue along with the video was kind of mentally pausing the video in my head turning it into an Inside Out sequence. I will say there were some parts that just didn’t match up to Buzz’s overall demeanor and how I would portray his emotions to be at. For example, it seemed like the fear input at the very end was a little too much. Maybe there should have been an ending dialogue with Joy to kind of balance out Fear’s fear of Woody and Anger’s boost of Buzz being the ****. After seeing Woody’s badge he calms down from the fear/anger mix and is sort of joyed for a “deputy” someone in charge. I hope you get what I’m kind of saying.
Disgust: “Uhhh, what in the world did I just read?”
Anger: “They turned a great beginning action sequence into some damn hunty language, the **** is that!?”
Fear: “Oh no! I don’t want them to be eliminated.”
Saddness: “I guess they did it to themselves. They dug their grave, so they’re going to lie in it.”
Joy: “Oh you guys, look on the bright side… at least they tried.”
But seriously, what is this? So Captain America happens to know about the Natalia Kills thing, Katniss whom is from a completely different movie and not related, Katy Perry, Ariana, Gaga, and the others I’m missing? This is more like an inner dialogue for an ATRLer hoping Chris Evans happened to be gay. There could have been a different scene chosen and this could have been better. Points for trying, trying to be creative, and trying to be funny; but it just didn’t pay off for me.
Amaloner & thecptz:
I kind of get it, but then yet again I kind of don’t. I see it, but I don’t see it. I’m reading it, but I’m not reading it clearly. It just feels so short and blunt, like you could have easily extended that scene to [spoiler alert for those who have not seen Titanic] Jack finally gets her on a boat, but she jumps back off and back to Jack. Like there could have been an extension of dialogue there for you to use than just that moment. I just think you all cut it off way too early.
Urban & Genetic:
That was really good! I thoroughly enjoyed this. I get a sense of the dialogue of the emotions with the dialogue going on between the two. This was very well done. The graphics too were so on point for this, that it was so creative. The way you had the two headquarters kind of interacting in different scenes were so cool. My two criticisms though… 1) When people have to read, choose a yellow that isn’t so bright that makes it hard to read (especially if it’s like me with a grayscale scheme so my background is a light gray). 2) The ATRL language like hunty and clocking. Do you really think during that period of that movie those would be the appropriate terms that would happen? It’s just some minor details to think about.
Dwuw & Sabbath:
I’m going to be totally honest with you two, and to everyone reading this… I have never seen Star Wars. Not even in one film, so I have no idea what in the bloody hell is going on. You know what though, I’m going to believe the dialogue as true, even though I wouldn’t have pegged for Star Wars to have that little bit of humor? Was it supposed to be humorous? As for the dialogue, I do think it works really well with the script. I can see it flowing in-between the dialogues.
Guero & Prismatic:
To me this was just pure perfection. I read all the entries about twice and each time I always went back to your guys’ entry more than the others. It is so well written and just goes with the flow of emotions in the movie on what is going through Katniss’ head. You even got it down to where this event produced a blue core member that gets Katniss through the other movies. Like I want more. I want an Inside Out Hunger Games franchise made pronto… by you guys.
Wesley & Lana:
This happens to provide another great example… of word choices. Dis Bish, ugly bitch, ugly hoe; like do you think it would be that kind of dialogue Harry’s voice would have inside his head? It just doesn’t work for me and makes it less believable and not want to read it. Honesty is the best policy though, I didn’t really read it. I just couldn’t. You had like a 5:1 ratio of script and inside emotion script. The balance was off and I didn’t care for it.
Marvin & Duke:
It was cute. I quite enjoyed it. I can see the emotions matching the scene perfectly. Just for some reason it feel like the emotion dialogue was a lot shorter than scene you wanted us to watch for the dialogue. Maybe that’s a kudos to ya’lls writing style making me want to read more. I actually do want to read more, like a dialogue during Hakuna Matata. Ugh, I love that song.
Buyonce & Eoghan:
That was adorable! The custom gifs with the dialogues; that was really cool! Now here is where I’m going to contradict myself if you read any of my other comments to some of the teams; instead of it feeling too short, this just felt too long. You had gifs upon gifs upon gifs, which made it esthetically pleasing and great way to read things, it just kind of took the impact of your work out with how long it all felt. To me anyway. Another factor I saw is how you used Joy, Anger, and Disgust fairly well; but didn’t give real good more good examples of Fear, or really any for Sadness. Like Part 6 you have Joy basically saying something sad, that would have been a perfect place for Sadness, but it wasn’t used. Overall I think you both did a really good job!
Prezli & Legend E:
Ugh. The one time the annoying ATRL/online/possibly gay? lingo could work here, in bits and pieces, got over used real fast. I just don’t know about this. I was all in because just looking at the structure and the script, you all had a real thing going here. You really think the inside of Elle’s mind she’s going to have the now type of lingo, an in promotion for Kelly songs, or even a Focus promotion breakdown? No. She’s a Cali girl through and through with attitude. This was a time to make her sassy with the emotions like Joy, Anger, and Disgust, man a whole lot of disgust attitude going on, but have that equal balance of Fear and Saddness. In which you did do that, but you took it, for me, to an annoying level with the lingo and promotions. Had you of had toned it down and kept everything in the same zone of things. This would have been one of my absolute favorites.
Qatari & Theus:
More lingo in the wrong places and such a mouthful of it. I’m reiterating like a damn broken record here, but why would Anna’s inner emotions be talking in the now lingo when the scene was set many many many years ago in a different time period in which people wouldn’t be using flop, jenny, ice cream cone hoe, drag; like no. I’m not expecting to everyone to go full on into the period with the exact language, but you have to think Inside Out. It’s a children’s movie that have distinct personalities for emotions because each emotion is different. Each emotion is not a sideline hoe to ATRL. It’s like just try to be realistic to the scene without trying to me like “I’m going to throw in these words to get some kiis.”
Tiberius & Feels:
First, I hate horror movies. Have not seen the Exorcist and do not plan on it. I don’t miss with the devil and Satan and all that. My friends all the time trick me into seeing horror films and I curse them for it. Then on the flip side I love ghost hunting and getting evidence. I’m weird. Aside from the tangent it brings me to Secondly, thank you for bringing some humor into this so it’s not all scary. That’s ultimately as far as I can probably go without the downsides. Inside Out, it’s a kid’s movie, it’s supposed to be happy and clean and I think you did that until Martha came in. Not only does that not go with a kid’s movie, but would the mom REALLY be thinking of Martha like that when her daughter is being possessed by Satan and he’s stabbing her in the vajayjay with a crucifix? Um no. Would she also be thinking of no longer having grandchildren because the pluming may now be ruined? No. I’m all for so humor to take away, but like what I’ve been saying to others it just needs to be realistic.
Team #2: Superpower & Bloomers -
It was a little repetitive in parts, but omg I was reading this in the characters voices and picturing the whole thing. I lowkey enjoyed it and I think you nailed all the characters.
Team #3: enxe & lovesong -
It was really cute but I wish you used more character variety, poor Sadness and her 1 line cameo.
Team #4: Bitchcraft & Danial -
wyd
Team #5: Amaloner & thecptz -
Wait at this emotional journey, except it's so short. It didn't really go anywhere.
Team #6: Urban_Fan & genetic fail -
**** just got real dark. I'm not sure about this drastic turn of events. Literally one of my fav movie scenes ever it's so iconic but it's WAY too long girl. Couldn't read that yellow font either.
Team #7: dwuw & Sabbath -
This was cute I liked it, love the little pic at the bottom too. Format that text though hennys
Team #8: Guero & Prismatic -
a biT long but I liked it. Maybe switch up the characters a it more to make it more punchy.
Team #14: wesleywalrus & Lana Del Yonce -
An actual mess.
Team #16: Marvin & MimiLamb/Duke. -
A biT too short, there's not much to it.
Team #20: Buyonce1814 & Eóghan -
The layout is really confusing, too many gifs not enough original text.
Team #23: prezli & Legend E -
I liked it a lot but some of the characters were getting a little muddled. disgust was more like anger at times.
Team #24: Qatari Monster & Theus -
A hot mess without the hot.
Team #26: Tiberius & feelslikeadream -
I'm laughing so much, it's so tragic but so amazing. Omg. This unlikely mashup.
Comments 4
Team #2 – Jurassic Park – This is perfect.
Team #3 – Toy Story – Interestingly, this scene basically has all of the emotions in it already. So that was a cool find. At the same time though, your dialogue was a bit literal, but overall, a good entry.
Team #4 – The Avengers – This dialogue looks like it was written by ATRLers rather than by Captain America’s emotions. I appreciate the personality you guys put into this, but it misses the mark of expressing that specific character’s emotional dialogue. I think it also got a bit out of control towards the end.
Team #5 – Titanic – This is really sparse and unimaginative. Sorry.
Team #6 – Scream – This is SO GOOD. So many amazing details and everything works perfectly.
Team #7 – Star Wars – Simple, but creative. I think you hit the basic marks well and applied the emotions to the scene.
Team #8 – The Hunger Games – This scene always makes me cry. Um, I think this was pretty flawlessly executed. You guys integrated the emotions with the script so well, and I appreciated how each emotion had a starring role at the appropriate time. The core memory at the end was a great finishing touch.
Team #14 – Harry Potter – This was… interesting. Some of the emotions were applied to the scene well, but others were a bit of a stretch, like disgust. I think you could have gone much further with this.
Team #16 – The Lion King – This was good overall. You hit the requirements of the challenge.
Team #20 – Finding Nemo – WOW. This is amazing! Your GIF use was on point and super creative. I loved this entry, and you all put amazing effort into this.
Team #23 – Legally Blonde – The Kelly promo was brilliant lol. Overall, a really strong entry. I am skeptical of using ATRL lingo in entries this round, but I think your use was fairly justified given Elle’s character. The thought process and emotions were well demonstrated.
Team #24 – Frozen – This is a mess, honestly. It goes too far away from the scene, and the ATRL lingo is overdone, resulting in the emotions’ being represented improperly.
Team #26 – The Exorcist – This one is in the middle of the pack for me. Some of the dialogue was on point, while other moments were a bit out of character.
Comments 5
Team #2: Superpower & Bloomers
FIVE-WORD COMMENT!: Really cute, I liked it!
Team #3: enxe & lovesong
FIVE-WORD COMMENT: Accurate but could've been better.
Team #4: Bitchcraft & Danial
FIVE-WORD COMMENT: Entertaining but also lowkey messy.
Team #5: Amaloner & thecptz
FIVE-WORD COMMENT: Could've been way better, honestly.
Team #6: URBAN & genetic fail
FIVE-WORD COMMENT: Flawless presentation, has SLIGHT flaws.
Team #7: dwuw & Sabbath
FIVE-WORD COMMENT: Decent and fits the scene.
Team #8: Guero & Prismatic
FIVE-WORD COMMENT: THIS IS SO ****ING GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Team #14: wesleywalrus & Lana Del Yonce
FIVE-WORD COMMENT: Wish this was more serious
Team #16: Marvin & Duke.
FIVE-WORD COMMENT: Ddd this is so adorable.
Team #20: Buyonce1814 & Eóghan
FIVE-WORD COMMENT: Really well done and spot-on!
Team #23: prezli & Legend E
FIVE-WORD COMMENT: Good, needs less ATRL lingo.
Team #24: Qatari Monster & Theus
FIVE-WORD COMMENT: Qatari... Theus... what is this...
Team #26: Tiberius & feelslikeadream
FIVE-WORD COMMENT: Okay but nothing too special.
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