@kennylovesRihanna, the song is good but it's not groundbreaking. This is from my honest opinion from my 1st listen(I dunno if it's gonna grow on me). I just wanna be fair
1. The production is average.
2. Definitely a filler.
3. The chorus is too average and it's something you've heard a lot.
4. The first verse is good but it goes downhill after that.
5. You need to do something about the arrangement. It just don't work.
6. The instruments, you need more of that production-wise.
7. I love your voice tho.
8. Overall, the song is flat all the way, you don't feel much from it.
9. The verses and chorus sound the same..and I don't feel the adrenaline when the chorus kicks in.
10. You certainly can improve this song. lyrically and production-wise
@kennylovesRihanna, the song is good but it's not groundbreaking. This is from my honest opinion from my 1st listen(I dunno if it's gonna grow on me). I just wanna be fair
1. The production is average.
2. Definitely a filler.
3. The chorus is too average and it's something you've heard a lot.
4. The first verse is good but it goes downhill after that.
5. You need to do something about the arrangement. It just don't work.
6. The instruments, you need more of that production-wise.
7. I love your voice tho.
8. Overall, the song is flat all the way, you don't feel much from it.
9. The verses and chorus sound the same..and I don't feel the adrenaline when the chorus kicks in.
10. You certainly can improve this song. lyrically and production-wise
OMG I already said this isnt me singing this song! lol this song went to #1 on the billboard hot 100 in 1990 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Close_t...xi_Priest_song) lol I just wanted a critique on the video if you dint mind. I chose that song cuse thats my fave song and I love Rihanna
OMG I already said this isnt me singing this song! lol this song went to #1 on the billboard hot 100 in 1990 http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Close_t...xi_Priest_song) lol I just wanted a critique on the video if you dint mind. I chose that song cuse thats my fave song and I love Rihanna
That was what I thought when I first listened the song and I didn't lie and as for the video, well done!! but you need more intimate and dramatic moments
That was what I thought when I first listened the song and I didn't lie and as for the video, well done!! but you need more intimate and dramatic moments
OMG you voice is like Enrique Iglesias 
