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Originally posted by Golden
I don't like the first two sentences as they do not make any sense. How can love be ''too tight''
I don't understand the entire second sentence. What do you mean you can't see the light once you start 'adoring her'?
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well, it was supposed to highlight the opposition between the two phases of love: when it is perfect, and when you just wanna be free. Also, the second sentence was supposed to say that as well. I meant that at one time, you adore her, at another, you can't see the light, meaning you wanna break up. But apparently, it's not well-written, so I'll rewrite it
