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UFO
Member Since: 9/1/2012
Posts: 25,973
Post #27921
Prayers won't ever give you answers
So why am I searching, searching
Stop light, always stuck on amber
And then I stop hoping, hoping
Finished the pre-chorus.
Quote:
Originally posted by
dwuw
Are you for real?
Love the snippet you posted too
YES! I love how all the lines are connected and it flows like a story. Thank you bb
swiftie13
Member Since: 1/13/2012
Posts: 13,577
Post #27922
How do I hide my text like that? I wanna post a snippet
Truth Teller
Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 41,181
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Post #27923
Quote:
Originally posted by
swiftie13
Okay, my song is terrible. This week is too much, I feel so stuck and I have two papers to write
What I said a few pages back applies to you too. If you want a few extra hours after the deadline to put the song together, let me know
Truth Teller
Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 41,181
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Post #27924
Quote:
Originally posted by
swiftie13
How do I hide my text like that? I wanna post a snippet
Use spoiler tags. Quote me to see it
Text
Stark
ATRL Contributor
Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 40,803
Post #27925
With no dictators, you can
do what you want
.
yas @ me referencing me
Truth Teller
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Posts: 41,181
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Post #27926
Quote:
Originally posted by
dwuw
With no dictators, you can
do what you want
.
yas @ me referencing me
I love that actually
UFO
Member Since: 9/1/2012
Posts: 25,973
Post #27927
This is the first time I haven't sent so early, I'm glad I'm taking my time with this one
I'm also learning not to be afraid of cutting lines out/rewriting them
It's something I struggled with in the past but I'm getting there
Jackson
Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 37,384
Post #27928
Ddd none of the things that have happened to me in the past week are calm idk how I'm gonna write this
swiftie13
Member Since: 1/13/2012
Posts: 13,577
Post #27929
Thanks Truthy for both posts
Stark
ATRL Contributor
Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 40,803
Post #27930
I felt the poison running through my veins,
You were a scorpion and I was your prey,
I wanted to escape, had to break the chains.
I didn't think twice, I just ran away.
I needed to escape, I escaped to a land.
With no dictators, you can do what you want.
Without your shadows, they can't haunt anyone.
And after all this time, I'm the one who won.
A bit cliché but I like it
UFO
Member Since: 9/1/2012
Posts: 25,973
Post #27931
One word is all it to takes to break... but I was already broken
This week has been so stressful and emotional for me irl so I'm glad I can release my thoughts this way.
It's very therapeutic and I love writing songs I relate to.
I feel proud.
A reverse Warholian experience, I'm supposed to be insecure goTdammit!
Stark
ATRL Contributor
Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 40,803
Post #27932
Quote:
Originally posted by
EuphorianSea
One word is all it to takes to break... but I was already broken
This week has been so stressful and emotional for me irl so I'm glad I can release my thoughts this way.
It's very therapeutic and I love writing songs I relate to.
I feel proud.
A reverse Warholian experience, I'm supposed to be insecure goTdammit!
omg is that a line to your song? it's flawless
swiftie13
Member Since: 1/13/2012
Posts: 13,577
Post #27933
My first verse, I think...
My wondering eyes grow curious of their surroundings
In shifting sights, I am left so astounded
There, beauty lies and it seems so inviting
For me to try, it is you that I'm wanting
A broken heart looks for emancipation
Your eyes caught mine, I feel a warm sensation
Some careful strides and playful conversations
Your body begs for my participation
We step in time to the rhythm of a new sound
I'm hesitant, but you're making me come round
Clever words and you begin to gain ground
Superficial, but somehow it feels profound
Please let me know what y'all think, I had begining.
Edit: maybe I posted something too long but whatever
UFO
Member Since: 9/1/2012
Posts: 25,973
Post #27934
Quote:
Originally posted by
GotSkill
Ddd none of the things that have happened to me in the past week are calm idk how I'm gonna write this
Maybe you can twist it on its head and write about what calmness would feel like.
Sometimes writing opposite to how you feel/what's going on is the best inspiration out there if you catch my drift.
Quote:
Originally posted by
dwuw
omg is that a line to your song? it's flawless
Yes it is I just came up with it now ty
Stark
ATRL Contributor
Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 40,803
Post #27935
OMG this concept. You think you're feeling free of this relationship but actually you're just high.
moijejoue
Member Since: 1/6/2014
Posts: 1,893
Post #27936
So. The new guy kept looking at me.
Unfortunately, I'm at the stage where I'm the arrogant bitch that avoids him out of shyness.
swiftie13
Member Since: 1/13/2012
Posts: 13,577
Post #27937
Quote:
Originally posted by
dwuw
I felt the poison running through my veins,
You were a scorpion and I was your prey,
I wanted to escape, had to break the chains.
I didn't think twice, I just ran away.
I needed to escape, I escaped to a land.
With no dictators, you can do what you want.
Without your shadows, they can't haunt anyone.
And after all this time, I'm the one who won.
A bit cliché but I like it
I feel like this song would go amazing with big drums, I love it
Stark
ATRL Contributor
Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 40,803
Post #27938
Quote:
Originally posted by
swiftie13
My first verse, I think...
My wondering eyes grow curious of their surroundings
In shifting sights, I am left so astounded
There, beauty lies and it seems so inviting
For me to try, it is you that I'm wanting
A broken heart looks for emancipation
Your eyes caught mine, I feel a warm sensation
Some careful strides and playful conversations
Your body begs for my participation
We step in time to the rhythm of a new sound
I'm hesitant, but you're making me come round
Clever words and you begin to gain ground
Superficial, but somehow it feels profound
Please let me know what y'all think, I had begining.
Edit: maybe I posted something too long but whatever
Were you the one that said your song was horrible? Chill this is amazing
Truth Teller
Member Since: 1/1/2014
Posts: 41,181
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Post #27939
Quote:
Originally posted by
moijejoue
So. The new guy kept looking at me.
Unfortunately, I'm at the stage where I'm the arrogant bitch that avoids him out of shyness.
I've been there
keshaspearsxo
Member Since: 7/15/2012
Posts: 30,915
Post #27940
My song is a social commentary on the state of the economy and a satire of the political world with an underlying theme of erotica and bloodplay. #CHAOS
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