[Jaxswim]

I think I'm gonna rewrite mine altogether bc right now it's serving a rehash of last season's without the original meter thing. Lemme serve aesthetic this season

[ceremonials]

Originally posted by Wild Child

I'm having doubts about my song, I just finished writing it. Was going to 2 verses of 8 lines, but now decided to do 3 verses of 4 lines.

I think this might work better for your song.

[Tylerbv]

Originally posted by jpow

I started my new last.fm at the end of last year so I have virtually nothing.

http://www.last.fm/user/ryker_

RuPaul being your #1 artist
I have a lot of scrobbles compared to a lot of y'all

[Temporal]

Originally posted by ceremonials

Most likely. I am unsure of a few lines and inwant it to be perfect

Alright, I'm about to send the latest entries to the judges so let me know!

[Jaxswim]

http://last.fm/user/jaxswim

check it out hennies

[DevonDreams]

this is my last.fm http://www.last.fm/user/devonminaj
#diversity

[ceremonials]

"In the face of adversity" sounds so awkward to me. Like it's a better word but it feels clunky.

Preceding line: "She looked me in the eyes and asked me what I'd done"...

In the face of adversity / Why is it that you run?
In the face of every challenge / Why is it that you run?
At the smallest sign of storms / Why is it that you run?

I like all three for different reasons and I can't pick.

[Tylerbv]

Every last.fm I've clicked on in here has said "You both listen to Ellie Goulding"
The queen ha power.

[Achilles.]

Why oh why did Shawn put the line "begging you to come out" in the chorus of Stitches if it doesn't fit the rhyme scheme unless it's a gay thing?

[Tylerbv]

Originally posted by ceremonials

"In the face of adversity" sounds so awkward to me. Like it's a better word but it feels clunky.

Preceding line: "She looked me in the eyes and asked me what I'd done"...

In the face of adversity / Why is it that you run?
In the face of every challenge / Why is that you run?
At the smallest sign of storms / Why is it that you run?

I like all three for different reasons and I can't pick.

At the smallest sign of storms sounds grammatically incorrect for some reason
The first one is the best.

[Temporal]

Originally posted by Tylerbv

Every last.fm I've clicked on in here has said "You both listen to Ellie Goulding"
The queen ha power.

Originally posted by Achilles.

Why oh why did Shawn put the line "begging you to come out" in the chorus of Stitches if it doesn't fit the rhyme scheme unless it's a gay thing?

He can do whatever he wants

[ceremonials]

He has to be gay. Has to be.

Am actually in love with him. King

[Jaxswim]

Originally posted by DevonDreams

this is my last.fm http://www.last.fm/user/devonminaj
#diversity

2NE1

[Jackson]

Originally posted by ceremonials

Colorado is cool BC weed.

Colorado people hate people that think all we do is smoke weed everyday tho. We don't really care about it

[ceremonials]

Originally posted by Tylerbv

At the smallest sign of storms sounds grammatically incorrect for some reason
The first one is the best.

I think it's because the phrase is usually "At the smallest sign of a storm"

[Tylerbv]

Originally posted by Achilles.

Why oh why did Shawn put the line "begging you to come out" in the chorus of Stitches if it doesn't fit the rhyme scheme unless it's a gay thing?

That song has been popular in Canada for like a year and a half I s2g. I can't listen to it anymore but it comes on the radio every day and I wanna die

[Temporal]

Originally posted by ceremonials

He has to be gay. Has to be.

Am actually in love with him. King

Same, back off my man

[jpow]

Welp, I sent my song

[ceremonials]

Can we agree DHYis the best song on lemonade? OK? Ok.

Not lyrically but as a whole.

[Jackson]

My last.fm is actual diversity

http://www.last.fm/user/chicag1