Close my eyes and I see you
Open them and I see you too
Isn't that good, just me and you?
Doing things that people do?
Life's got an amazing view
Like a pair of brand new shoes
That just say hello to you
We know anything will do
For you
And me too
With you
You too
Ooh
Close my eyes and I see you
Open them and I see you too
Isn't that good, just me and you?
Doing things that people do?
Life's got an amazing view
Like a pair of brand new shoes
That just say hello to you
We know anything will do
For you
And me too
With you
You too
Ooh
Yass this could slay as Carly Rae Jepsen's second single, I love the opening
Wrote another one thanks for the positive feedback <3 It's the same song
Having fun in the sun
I lick your gun just for sun
We're playing golf and you're about to putt
We're a movie and you're the scene that got cut
I'm a pelvis and you're the butt
I'm a house and you're the hut
I'm a window and you're the shut
I'm a candle and you're the wax
But I'm not a **** unless I swallow your nut
Hold me in the morning
As i kiss you on your neck
The day is nice and sunny
But we stay late in bed
Nice and slow we're turning
As you grab me on my side
One on one exploring
Doesn't matter, the time
Cus in this very moment
I am all yours
Give myself completely
Heart, body, and soul
I wrote over hundreds of songs. Songs that are either from my experiences, fantasy or the reality or just making statements.
Here are 3 of my songs:
XXX
- a fantasy song
Verse 1:
Make my night the best of all
My body's ready to fall
My eyes still clear and bright still
Make me blind for a second
The room is dark but my mind is wild
I can see colors in the dark
My hands are free to roam around
Your body, down to waist and your thighs
Let me tell you something crazy honey
Chorus:
Tonight (XXX)
My body's ready (XXX)
To take all the works (XXX)
You're the commander (XXX)
I am your soldier (XXX)
Don't wanna be your buddy anymore
I'm gonna touch your body like never before
Like never before (XXX)
Verse 2:
But then you're not here,
You're there sleeping
Thinking that you and I are having sex
Pretend that you're not even my ex
Let's make this love a mess
Let me tell you something crazy honey
(Chorus)
Bridge:
Tonight my body's ready
To take all the work
You're the commander
I'm your soldier
To take all the work
Now, tell me something crazy honey
(Chorus)
United By The Music
- me trying to make a statement
Verse1:
Fighting here, fighting there
You can't find your luck in there
So come here and dance
Wasting time, wasting gold
You can't get back in your true mold
So come here and love
People sing, people dance
It's a nature in human kind
So come here and wave your hands in the air
Pre:
People wanna stay up all night
Doing nothing, just watching
People wanna talk up all night
About nothing, doing nothing
Chorus:
So come here, have your night
The party don't stop till tomorrow's midnight
Grab your friends, grab your knight
Be a rebel for once in your life
Rebel of love
The party never stop till we're united by the music
The dancing never stop till we're united by the music
The screaming never stop till we're united by the music
The killing never stop till we're united by the music
Verse2:
Lethal smile, lethal eye
That sure can make you die
So come here and dance
Raise your guns, guns of smile
Shoot them with your gun of smiles
And run here, for your life
Repeat Pre + Chorus
Bridge:
Just grab my hands
I'll take you there
Just grab your friends
I'll take you there
Oh oh
Lemme just grab your heart
Lemme just grab my knife
Hahahaha
Repeat Pre + Chorus
Embracing The Silence
- song about being alone but still being happy
Verse 1:
I feel so lucky
When I'm alone
Got no reason
To hold my phone
Got my pen
My papers at home
And write stories
About my bone
Pre:
I got no one today
I just got myself
Got no one to stay
But I'm proud to say
Chorus:
I'm embracing the night
I'm embracing the silence
Letting in the light
I'm embracing my sadness
Cause today
I'm alone
And I don't really care
I'm finding
Myself
From these sadness
I'm embracing the silence
Verse 2:
Here in the corner
I'm talking to walls
Asking for answer
But now I suppose
I found the answer
It's in my soul
I live for now
And just for now
Repeat Pre + Chorus
Bridge:
First I thought I was so out of place
But now I found myself a space
Now laying here gazing the stars
Making my night the best one night
Wrote another one thanks for the positive feedback <3 It's the same song
Having fun in the sun
I lick your gun just for sun
We're playing golf and you're about to putt
We're a movie and you're the scene that got cut
I'm a pelvis and you're the butt
I'm a house and you're the hut
I'm a window and you're the shut
I'm a candle and you're the wax
But I'm not a **** unless I swallow your nut
Well that song escalated quickly
I liked the first part, agree with the comment about it serving Carly rae teas
Okay because of all the good feedback I wrote the third and final section of that song so here's it all together
Close my eyes and I see you
Open them and I see you too
Isn't that good, just me and you?
Doing things that people do?
Life's got an amazing view
Like a pair of brand new shoes
That just say hello to you
We know anything will do
For you
And me too
With you
You too
Ooh
Having fun in the sun
I lick your gun just for sun
We're playing golf and you're about to putt
We're a movie and you're the scene that got cut
I'm a pelvis and you're the butt
I'm a house and you're the hut
I'm a window and you're the shut
I'm a candle and you're the wax
But I'm not a **** unless I swallow your nut
Sometimes I want to die
Life's hard like baking an apple pie
I won't say hello because I'm shy
But I'm also a bird, so I'm gonna fly
I'm gonna fly into the sky
I won't see you so I'll say goodbye
Sometimes I want to die
Life's hard like baking an apple pie
Me & my boredom lyrics. But I'd rather do this than literally anything else so.
This is some kind of electro-dance song. And yes I know the pre-chorus lyrics suck but I rly like it like that I WANNA LOSE CONTROL
LYRICS
[Chorus]
Ooh, I wanna lose control
I wanna see the stars at night
At the end of the road
Ooh, I wonder do you know
Do you know just what it takes
To make me feel whole
[Post-Chorus] x2
Cause this feeling oh yeah this feeling
Got me all wrapped and I can’t see the ceiling
[Verse 1]
Tell me do you like all that you see
I can make your life multiply
If you come with me
Don’t go too far off on your own
It’s a cold cold world out there
You’ll need someone to hold
[Chorus]
[Post-Chorus] x2
[Bridge]
Ooh don’t ever let go
Don’t ever let go of the one
That makes you feel whole
I wrote over hundreds of songs. Songs that are either from my experiences, fantasy or the reality or just making statements.
Here are 3 of my songs:
XXX
- a fantasy song
Verse 1:
Make my night the best of all
My body's ready to fall
My eyes still clear and bright still
Make me blind for a second
The room is dark but my mind is wild
I can see colors in the dark
My hands are free to roam around
Your body, down to waist and your thighs
Let me tell you something crazy honey
Chorus:
Tonight (XXX)
My body's ready (XXX)
To take all the works (XXX)
You're the commander (XXX)
I am your soldier (XXX)
Don't wanna be your buddy anymore
I'm gonna touch your body like never before
Like never before (XXX)
Verse 2:
But then you're not here,
You're there sleeping
Thinking that you and I are having sex
Pretend that you're not even my ex
Let's make this love a mess
Let me tell you something crazy honey
(Chorus)
Bridge:
Tonight my body's ready
To take all the work
You're the commander
I'm your soldier
To take all the work
Now, tell me something crazy honey
(Chorus)
United By The Music
- me trying to make a statement
Verse1:
Fighting here, fighting there
You can't find your luck in there
So come here and dance
Wasting time, wasting gold
You can't get back in your true mold
So come here and love
People sing, people dance
It's a nature in human kind
So come here and wave your hands in the air
Pre:
People wanna stay up all night
Doing nothing, just watching
People wanna talk up all night
About nothing, doing nothing
Chorus:
So come here, have your night
The party don't stop till tomorrow's midnight
Grab your friends, grab your knight
Be a rebel for once in your life
Rebel of love
The party never stop till we're united by the music
The dancing never stop till we're united by the music
The screaming never stop till we're united by the music
The killing never stop till we're united by the music
Verse2:
Lethal smile, lethal eye
That sure can make you die
So come here and dance
Raise your guns, guns of smile
Shoot them with your gun of smiles
And run here, for your life
Repeat Pre + Chorus
Bridge:
Just grab my hands
I'll take you there
Just grab your friends
I'll take you there
Oh oh
Lemme just grab your heart
Lemme just grab my knife
Hahahaha
Repeat Pre + Chorus
Embracing The Silence
- song about being alone but still being happy
Verse 1:
I feel so lucky
When I'm alone
Got no reason
To hold my phone
Got my pen
My papers at home
And write stories
About my bone
Pre:
I got no one today
I just got myself
Got no one to stay
But I'm proud to say
Chorus:
I'm embracing the night
I'm embracing the silence
Letting in the light
I'm embracing my sadness
Cause today
I'm alone
And I don't really care
I'm finding
Myself
From these sadness
I'm embracing the silence
Verse 2:
Here in the corner
I'm talking to walls
Asking for answer
But now I suppose
I found the answer
It's in my soul
I live for now
And just for now
Repeat Pre + Chorus
Bridge:
First I thought I was so out of place
But now I found myself a space
Now laying here gazing the stars
Making my night the best one night
Jezang, a "post-chorus" is actually called a tag. It tags on to the end of the chorus.
For example, in the embedded song below...
"So don't you, don't you tell me no,
(My necessary evil)
Yeah I'm in control,
(My necessary evil)
Guilty pleasure is a way to go,
(My necessary evil)
So don't you get emotional,
(My necessary evil)"
is the chorus, and
" Baby you ain't nothing but a necessary evil
(My necessary evil)
Baby you ain't nothing but a necessary evil
(My necessary evil)
Baby you ain't nothing but a necessary evil
(My necessary evil)
Baby you ain't nothing but a necessary evil
(My necessary evil)"
@Jez Looz, I bet you mean post-chorus nice lyrics too
Oh whoops yes I meant post-chorus! I switched up the labels last minute and forgot to edit my original sentence. ty!
Quote:
Originally posted by Tymps.
Jezang, a "post-chorus" is actually called a tag. It tags on to the end of the chorus.
For example, in the embedded song below...
"So don't you, don't you tell me no,
(My necessary evil)
Yeah I'm in control,
(My necessary evil)
Guilty pleasure is a way to go,
(My necessary evil)
So don't you get emotional,
(My necessary evil)"
is the chorus, and
" Baby you ain't nothing but a necessary evil
(My necessary evil)
Baby you ain't nothing but a necessary evil
(My necessary evil)
Baby you ain't nothing but a necessary evil
(My necessary evil)
Baby you ain't nothing but a necessary evil
(My necessary evil)"
is the tag.
Is it? I just go by the format I see other lyrics site use (never saw tag but I see post-chorus) but I will check this out. ty!
dd nevermind don't take my word for the tag thing, all the sources I'm looking at are telling me different things and all of their answers are different from what I was taught it was too.
dd nevermind don't take my word for the tag thing, all the sources I'm looking at are telling me different things and all of their answers are different from what I was taught it was too.
Yeah, there really is no official name for it. I always call it the post-chorus too
Blowing hella strong
Nothing can go wrong
I can feel it in my soul
Time to let it go
Oh yeah, I'm feeling hella good
Like you knew I would
Blasting high off in the clouds
There’s no coming down
Oh yeah,
I got something going
And I'm feeling so good
Blowing hella strong
Got 'em feining for the wood
But I can't let 'em get too close
I let 'em know, its understood
Blowing hella strong
Damn right I'm feeling good
I’m feeling good
The things that come out while trying to break writers block. Although, there is just something about the second part that I love
Locked up tightly away
I walk the pageant parade
Where shouts become whispers
And tears keep falling like rain
They treat us all the same
But that’s just their hands speaking
Without pain, there’s glory
For those who don’t like breathing
Without shame, there’s “sorry”
For those who fear what it means
We regret, they forget
Happy endings don’t change me
We’re better off seen not heard
But no one deserves ears made to serve
The eyes with a narrow curse
As we stare straight back without a word
I might re-write a few parts, it always gets messy when the pre-chorus hits
Blowing hella strong
Nothing can go wrong
I can feel it in my soul
Time to let it go
Oh yeah, I'm feeling hella good
Like you knew I would
Blasting high off in the clouds
There’s no coming down
Oh yeah,
I got something going
And I'm feeling so good
Blowing hella strong
Got 'em feining for the wood
But I can't let 'em get too close
I let 'em know, its understood
Blowing hella strong
Damn right I'm feeling good
I’m feeling good
The things that come out while trying to break writers block. Although, there is just something about the second part that I love
Yasss this is my ****
It gives me easy breezy Spring anthem "feeling myself" vibes
XXX
nice lyrics too
yes I meant post-chorus! I switched up the labels last minute and forgot to edit my original sentence. ty!
