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Originally posted by EuphorianSea
Btw TT I thought "babe, any room will do I’ll go anywhere with you" was a lot more forced than "come, you’re the one I crave to a land so far away", but that's just me  |
Nah, not really. The reason why "a land so far away" was forced is because the song is entitled claustrophobia, which leads me to picture everything that's being described happening in a small room, so "a land so far away" is a contradiction. Not an important contradiction for the level of round 3 though.
And I'm a bit disappointed that I was mostly adjudicated on the theme of my song and not the lyrical content. I understand that the love = drug trope has been done before but did that really outweigh everything? (minus Matty) The only thing I really learned from your reviews is to not write about love=drug anymore 
I do agree on the lack of movement, Fefe. I felt the same way but I ran out of time. That's about the only comment that I have to grow on.
I'm glad you liked it!
