[conatus]

Originally posted by EuphorianSea

I was expecting more lashings tbh

Same... That's why I'm worried about Bloomers and Matty's reviews. There's always at least one who hates it.

[Stark]

Originally posted by conatus

Oh, mess at me and Jorge no longer being Tymps.' highest scores.

Who is?

[keshaspearsxo]

Personally I thought my chorus (particularly the first part) was the focal point. It tied everything together with the meaning behind the song and the tree image. To me, it also emphasised the feeling behind the song, but I guess that's how you felt

[conatus]

Originally posted by dwuw

Who is?

He gave out two 10s.

[UFO]

Originally posted by conatus

Same... That's why I'm worried about Bloomers and Matty's reviews. There's always at least one who hates it.

So far, Tymps has "hated" mine the most. Matty gave me more than a 6 which could mean nothing, but hopefully... And I'm not sure about Bloomers. He'll probably appreciate my song for what it is. I think I did enough to make it through. It all depends on what my average is

[8thPrince]

However, it was really weird you used this central space motif and then when we got to the chorus you’re like “jk lolol hula hula hula hoop!” Any idea that’s used a lot throughout the song should be used in your chorus. The contrasting ideas thing doesn’t work when the ideas are completely unrelated.

Aw man, I was hoping I could communicate the idea of the circular nature of orbits, the push and pull of gravity, and the rings of Saturn being like hula hoops Oh well, I'll have to work harder if I get a second chance

[Stark]

Originally posted by conatus

He gave out two 10s.

What But he said he gave out 0 10s. Who got them?

[Temporal]

I'm actually so pressed about my chorus somehow being polarizing Both of Tymps. reviews for me in Round 1 and 3 were my harshest ones to date

[conatus]

I honestly expected Tymps. to hate my song this week.

[conatus]

Originally posted by dwuw

What But he said he gave out 0 10s. Who got them?

He hasn't said yet.

[BlueM]

Just tell me when the results are out so I can make a huge scene of me being eliminated

EDIT: No, I'm not like that anyway

[Tymps.]

Originally posted by conatus

I honestly expected Tymps. to hate my song this week.

I actually think overall the fun songs had much higher scores from me than the sad songs. Don't doubt me.

[Gladion]

I got cut and split into 10 pieces. Bye girls.

[UFO]

Originally posted by BlueM

Just tell me when the results are out so I can make a huge scene of me being eliminated

EDIT: No, I'm not like that anyway

Nnnn hang in there sis

[conatus]

Originally posted by Tymps.

I actually think overall the fun songs had much higher scores from me than the sad songs. Don't doubt me.

You're so unpredictable.

[Pecinta Mariah]

1 negative review

okay time to sleep

[Jackson]

Yas the acclaim love you my Asian

[■YoungCalifornia■]

Damn, 3 negative reviews in a row. Peace out everyone

[Tymps.]

My hints for my tens, to be nice so everyone doesn't hate me!

Hints 1:



Hint 2:

[Musickid203]

Window Pane (Musickid203) : Holy ****, the line “I'm black and blue like a work of art” is amazing. That was a great way to reel me in. So powerful. Really the fact that you had that one line made me feel emotion right away and thus I felt in or the rest of the song. I’m kind of confused by some lines though, like the “food to my soul” part. Why is the house food to your soul?

OMG! The acclaim The fact that someone told me that this line was silly

I'm out this house
Its food to my soul
You're water under the bridge
The best story never told

Since I was finally able to leave the house and the abusive relationship I was happy and relieved. It was food to my soul.