[feelslikeadream]

I don't know which I am for any hints, but I'm excited for results

[Tymps.]

I'd post something from my voice recital but they're not on my computer.

I'm very nervous for results!

[Jack!]

Originally posted by GotSkill

I listened to that summertime one a few months ago and I loved it

Thank you! I liked your song you posted too, it was cute!

I'm not sure where Nait is, but I assume results will be posted soon!

[UFO]

[Jackson]

These results are taking 20 Years

[UFO]

[feelslikeadream]

Results on page 120!

[Tymps.]

When you post here I die
Just a little inside
I wonder if we got results, we got results

[Jackson]

I get Cardiac Arrest whenever someone posts in here. Buy the track Cardiac Arrest by Bad Suns in the link in my sig. Language and Perspective out June 24th

[Jack!]

Listen to my new song while waiting.


https://soundcloud.com/jackleesmusic/without-you-acoustic

[feelslikeadream]

This song is cute! Can you do a cover of Mariah's cover of "Without You"?

[Nait Phoenix]

Roughly six more minutes…

[Jackson]

[Tymps.]

You should add some variation in the verses so maybe just one time for the fourth chord in the verse's chord progression you could use a different chord like a bmin7 intead of an emin7

[Nait Phoenix]

So far the coolest experience I've ever… experienced in Platinum Hit. Great job to everyone. So, how'd you all fair!?

GotSkill - Strike Twice

Originally posted by Jack Lees

Catchy melody! I felt like your lyrics felt a bit non-factorish this week though, which isn’t good. I still enjoyed the melody though, so well done!

Originally posted by Hug

Is dat you doe? Can’t say I am entirely sure of what I am reading, though…

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

Super cool! You have a real talent with melody! I could never come up with something so catchy to this! That said, the lyrics aren't up to par… Don't abandon that skill for catchiness.

feelslikeadream - Tonight

Originally posted by Jack Lees

Slay that single cover! I liked the melody, but I felt it was a little repetitive and I’ll be honest, your lyrics weren’t my favourite from you. They were fun, which I assume that’s what you were going for. Hopefully next week I enjoy yours more.

Originally posted by Hug

I want J Lo to sing this.

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

I really like the way you worked with the instrumental; you knew when to pause, you knew how your syllables would play out, and it was really likable. The lyrics are not your best, so it shows that you are one to work side-by-side with…

Tymps. - Synesthesia

Originally posted by Jack Lees

I love everything about this! The lyrics are really nice and you’ve got a great chorus here! So well done, this is great.

Originally posted by Hug

This is your usual style, but I feel it’s easier to digest this time. Take that how you want, but I find that to be a good thing.

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

I'm happy with what I'm hearing! This is very interesting, because I'm really loving hearing how your songwriting works. I've heard it once, but this is different somehow. You're definitely in your element.

Scorpio King - One Million Lights

Originally posted by Jack Lees

This reminds me of another song, but I’m not sure which one haha. I liked it though and the chorus is catchy! Well done!

Originally posted by Hug

I can’t get over how much your writing style reminds me of my own. Probably why I like it so much.

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

Brilliant. By far, one of my favorite songs I've ever heard and read. It's the perfect blend of melody and lyrics I've heard out of the five.

EuphorianSea - Wait a Day

Originally posted by Jack Lees

There lyrics are quite good, great pop lyrics. I liked your song too, your chorus had great potential! Well done!

Originally posted by Hug

day-um gorl A bit much on the repetition…

Originally posted by Nait Phoenix

I felt like this was TOO repetitive. I've never heard "day" said so many times in one chorus. Other than that, it's interesting to take the concept of the beat and make it your own. Glad you got a second chance…

[UFO]

AHHHHHH these comments are wonderful

DEATH there's only SO many words that rhyme with day but I get what you mean anyways

[feelslikeadream]

Aww, Jack liked my single cover Thanks Jack!

I feel like Scorpio will (rightfully) take this round.

[UFO]

WAIT.. the comments were edited nooooo

Lol anyways I did my best with what I had to come up with in such short notice, I'm just glad I technically made the Top 5 at least

[UFO]

What happened with the original comments though??

[Tymps.]

Wait, I'm Huga's #1?

I think I'm Nait's #3 too. Let me respond to judge's comments, although there isn't much to say.

I love everything about this! The lyrics are really nice and you’ve got a great chorus here! So well done, this is great.

Omg thanks Jack! <3

This is your usual style, but I feel it’s easier to digest this time. Take that how you want, but I find that to be a good thing.

I definitely think that's good. I think Nait's poppy instrumentals sort of forced me to make things less abstract and more accessible, plus I think a catchy melody (which I hope mine was ) makes anything easier to digest. I mean, a song about school shooting went top 3 less than five years ago.

I'm happy with what I'm hearing! This is very interesting, because I'm really loving hearing how your songwriting works. I've heard it once, but this is different somehow. You're definitely in your element.

Thanks! I'll admit coming up with a melody was not very hard with me, I've been trained to come up with melodies just like [snap] that. For this one I knew you had to listen to a lot of songs so I used as much repetition as possible in order for it to stick more.

And overall, thanks for judging, judges!