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Originally posted by Jae
I can't tell from your post whether or not you've listened to The Magician 
Does it work just with the "Yeah!" as the line? |
I probably just didn't explain myself right
I guess the yeah is fine, but I meant having literally just one actual line wouldn't be bad in the song too... like when I'm in the club, i love screaming 'We're the ****ING ANIMALS' even though it's the only line in his song.
So I was suggesting getting at least one line down of a full sentence to use... but you can keep the Yeahs too... if that makes sense? I think it'd make the song stand out more as a demo though if you just had a line in there instead of just the yeahs imo. Idk what that line should be I'd have to think about it more.
Sorry if I was a bit unclear earlier x.x
I really think for that first build up, I liked the break, but after that you just go straight to that huge hook… make it worth the wait…
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definitely needs some lyrics though
