[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by Eros

I'm hacing trouble writing a bridge. The ****ed up part is that I had one down but I didn't write it and when I didn't I couldn't remember the melody so I scrapped it.

Im screwed.

Well, you have immunity

And 2 more days

[■YoungCalifornia■]

Truth Teller is lurking in here....go to sleep like everyone else! Damn

[Jackson]

Woo lawd I just got back from a 12 hour shift with no break and I haven't had a day off in 9 days

So if you PM'd me your song today I'll reply to you sometime tomorrow probably

[Jackson]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

Didn't Sam shade me for being too obvious when I submitted a song called Venice for the "describe a place" challenge in season 6?

That long ass song? Ddd the worst part about it was having to read the whole thing

[Jackson]

Originally posted by Sam 

I actually think that if I have a weakness in this song, it's the length. It's got three verses, for starters. Although my song last season "Italian Nights" had 4 verses iirc and GotSkill called it the longest song he'd ever seen and it still won that challenge.

oh wait this was the long ass song

[Buyonce1814]

I just can't think of a chorus

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by ■YoungCalifornia■

Truth Teller is lurking in here....go to sleep like everyone else! Damn

It's 11AM in my country, why would I go to sleep?

[Nait Phoenix]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

It's 11AM in my country, why would I go to sleep?

Oh, we're only 9 hours apart! Cool!

[conatus]

@ me when the reviews are out!

[Buyonce1814]

Do songs have to have choruses? The good sis Subterranean Homesick Blues doesn't have one nor does Bittersweet Symphony and Petals. Hmmmm is it worth the risk?

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by Buyonce1814

Do songs have to have choruses? The good sis Subterranean Homesick Blues doesn't have one nor does Bittersweet Symphony and Petals. Hmmmm is it worth the risk?

So, your song has no meter, no rhyming in the bridge and no chorus. This is shaping up to be the second shortest comeback in history after J Lo's On The Floor

[Buyonce1814]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

So, your song has no meter, no rhyming in the bridge and no chorus. This is shaping up to be the second shortest comeback in history after J Lo's On The Floor

The bridge now rhymes and I think there is meter (can you explain what this is again?).

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by Buyonce1814

The bridge now rhymes and I think there is meter (can you explain what this is again?).

No. It took me like 5 pages to fully explain it last time, so look for them

[Buyonce1814]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

No. It took me like 5 pages to fully explain it last time, so look for them

Nnnnnn. I didn't get it then either

[Buyonce1814]

I mean a quick search shows that Fefe dragged you all by using We Belong Together as an example of why meter is not really compulsory. However, I guess if 2 judges are for it and 1 doesn't curr...it's obvious which way to go. Let me sort the meter out. The rhymes are kind of on point imo.

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by Buyonce1814

I mean a quick search shows that Fefe dragged you all by using We Belong Together as an example of why meter is not really compulsory. However, I guess if 2 judges are for it and 1 doesn't curr...it's obvious which way to go. Let me sort the meter out. The rhymes are kind of on point imo.

In fefe's reviews last season, meter and stressing were main factors of why she didn't like a certain song, so he does care. Which is why he also gave you all a quick meter lesson last week.

[Buyonce1814]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

In fefe's reviews last season, meter and stressing were main factors of why she didn't like a certain song, so he does care. Which is why he also gave you all a quick meter lesson last week.

Is that when you were all bolding certain letters? I just couldn't get my head around the stresses

[Truth Teller]

Originally posted by Buyonce1814

Is that when you were all bolding certain letters? I just couldn't get my head around the stresses

There might be another lesson at some point I gues

[conatus]

Buyonce, don't risk it.

[Buyonce1814]

Originally posted by Truth Teller

There might be another lesson at some point I gues

Haha maybe. If meter = syllables then that's on point. I was literally using www.syllablecount.com to verify after counting each line on my fingers.