[C/H/A/N/E/L]

Almost done with my finale script. I just have two scenes left to write.

[maurixrosup]

Originally posted by C/H/A/N/E/L

Almost done with my finale script. I just have two scenes left to write.

Can't wait to read it

[Tylerbv]

I need an official OST. The music was flawless. I miss this show so much. I was so excited to see it every week and now I have nothing.

1000th page tho

[C/H/A/N/E/L]

The last couple pages are rough, but I present to y'all, my rendition of "The Final Girl(s)":

https://www.keepandshare.com/doc11/1...-pdf-214k?da=y

[XtinaPanicGodney]

Here for the title being changed to "TFG Fan-Fic Out Now!" and the script link being added on the first post.



It slays though. The motive and reveal was so well-done.

[Velvet]

Originally posted by C/H/A/N/E/L

The last couple pages are rough, but I present to y'all, my rendition of "The Final Girl(s)":

https://www.keepandshare.com/doc11/1...-pdf-214k?da=y

Let me start reading it and see which one I like the most

[Tylerbv]

Originally posted by C/H/A/N/E/L

The last couple pages are rough, but I present to y'all, my rendition of "The Final Girl(s)":

https://www.keepandshare.com/doc11/1...-pdf-214k?da=y

Let me read this and know that I willdecide if I like it better than Ryan's.

[genetic fail]

Originally posted by C/H/A/N/E/L

The last couple pages are rough, but I present to y'all, my rendition of "The Final Girl(s)":

https://www.keepandshare.com/doc11/1...-pdf-214k?da=y

Let me save this for later
Page 1000

[Grown K]

Originally posted by C/H/A/N/E/L

The last couple pages are rough, but I present to y'all, my rendition of "The Final Girl(s)":

https://www.keepandshare.com/doc11/1...-pdf-214k?da=y

Thank you for choosing a better killer and thank you for the blood bath and the horror the show needed.

[Tylerbv]

I love that Chanel laughing at #5's real name was still included.
YAS @ The Pete/Chad scene actually being explained + Grace taking action.
Human manifestation of an aneurysm
Mess @ the nod to the Pete transgender theory.
Wes biting it
Disney Bratz Doll
Magnum PMS
Not #5 being Meghan Trainor
Chanel #7
Sex with Criss Angel in a morgue
Feather constantly being shunned
Chanel throwing the cookie
Cathy being immortal and literally just running out of the room
Oop never mind. NOOO
YAS @ the iconic real-life Mii line.
Little Miss Piggy
I screamed @ Zayday scoots away from Grace
YAS @ Grace going down
Zayday running out
Stupid girl sleuthing
The Libby joke again


Much better than the real finale with the reveal + the lack of stupid accusations by Hester. I love Hester's character in this version a lot better. Slay. With a few minor refinements, I could see this being on TV instantly.

[Caesar]

mess

[Tylerbv]

Originally posted by Caesar

mess

nooo

[LaNathan]

Originally posted by C/H/A/N/E/L

The last couple pages are rough, but I present to y'all, my rendition of "The Final Girl(s)":

https://www.keepandshare.com/doc11/1...-pdf-214k?da=y

Cathy saying "The damn audacity!" left me ROLLING!


Magnum PMS

Cathy just over the ******** of being attacked.

Zayday just SPRINTING out of the room!

Denise being threatened about a restraining order "I WISH you would!"

Overall, great! The killer reveal was perfect although I would have loved for Cathy to just live even though she got stabbed tons of times.

[RudeBoyy]

Originally posted by C/H/A/N/E/L

The last couple pages are rough, but I present to y'all, my rendition of "The Final Girl(s)":

https://www.keepandshare.com/doc11/1...-pdf-214k?da=y

Um, is this just the last episode or 12/13? I think just the last right?

[C/H/A/N/E/L]

Originally posted by RudeBoyy

Um, is this just the last episode or 12/13? I think just the last right?

Just 13!

[RudeBoyy]

Originally posted by C/H/A/N/E/L

Just 13!

Thanks! It's slaying me so far, especially the part where #3 references them trying to kill her and she's like "What?"

[RudeBoyy]

Just finished and it SLAYEDT! Like honestly that was 10x better than the finale! Poor Ryan, C/H/A/N/E/L is doing his job better than him.

[Britney Jean]

Originally posted by C/H/A/N/E/L

The last couple pages are rough, but I present to y'all, my rendition of "The Final Girl(s)":

https://www.keepandshare.com/doc11/1...-pdf-214k?da=y

Much better than the original ending

[Hurem]

Woo at 1000 pages.

Let me read C/H/A/N/E/L's script.

[Hurem]

"Well, it is, you human manifestation of an aneurysm. It’s over. Just like Chad’s words WEREN’T before you went all Aileen Wuornos on him."

NO