THE BAREBACKER'S
The Entry: I like your idea with the comics. But I feel something is missing. It looks like you modified each member's entry and I kinda don't like that. It would be more personal if you subbmitted the descriptions as the members sent them to you.
6/10
Kiddo. : 6/10
brpk: 6/10
BlazingLovatic: 6/10
TheSeenScene: 6/10
Xenen: 5/10
The Royalty:
The Entry: I love this! Perfect entry, the entry I imagined for this challenge. Altho MsCherry kinda ruins the momentum in the end, it's not so big deal. I think you will slay!
9/10
Jad: 9/10
Katie: 10/10
stereo.love: 7/10
CBXC: 8/10
MsCherry: 5/10
Relentless <3's
The Entry: Cute entrYou and The Royalty had great entries with one member ruining all.
That EdgeOfAddiction gif.
The part at the end is cute.
7/10
CrazyCat: 7/10
medosuxx: 6/10
Nasiir15: 7/10
iHypeMusic: 3/10
EdgeOfAddiction: 8/10
The Barebacker's
OVERALL: 8.5/10
I really liked the layout and the way this was set up. Having the questionnaire style answers as well as the superhero theme made it more fun and appealing to read rather than a big block of bland text. I actually had fun reading this one, so good work putting it all together. [prude] Your name is icky, though. [/prude]
INDIVIDUAL:
Kiddo: 9/10
Loved the deadline weakness bit, I laughed.
BPRK: 7/10
Your description felt a bit wordy and the first sentence in it was a bit unclear.
BlazingLovatic: 8/10
Well written description. Would have loved to know more about you though.
TheSeenScene: 8/10
Love the description you came up with. Meow.
Xenen: 7/10
Interesting backstory but I'm confused if you're level headed or messy.
Royalty
OVERALL: 7.5/10
I really liked the layout of this one, but at first glance it looks way too wordy. I would have significantly cut down the length of each bio. Reading this one felt more like a task than something I wanted to do. Aside from that, I really like the royalty theme you've gone with and I think that was a strong decision.
INDIVIDUAL:
Jad: 8/10
Your bio, although a bit long, was really informative and I felt like I learned more about you. Kudos to you for talking about things like reading and writing rather than just dragging and fighting.
Katie: 8/10
It's clear how well you know yourself, and that's an asset. You hit the nail on the head when you described yourself as easy to get along with. Good for you!
stereo.love: 7/10
Welcome back! A bit on the long side, I like that you're open about being a bit shy. I applaud your honesty!
CBXC: 7/10
Again, a little long, and a bit less memorable than your teammates. Welcome to the Games section though!
MsCherry: 5/10
I know I told most of your teammates they wrote too much, but sadly you fall into the "wrote too little" category. Please capitalize the "i" in I'm. To steal a phrase from your bio: "Idk what to more to say".
Relentless
OVERALL: 6/10
Just a wee bit of formatting would have gone a long way with this one. Seeing a series of quotes with texts one after another just made it seem like it was never going to end. A more interesting layout would have drawn me in more. I did like the overall write up about the team, but almost would have preferred it at the start of the entry.
INDIVIDUAL:
CrazyCat: 6/10
This blurb was a bit all over the place and made me laugh - for a variety of reasons. From your bubbly personality to your worshipping of Edge, it was certainly a more memorable entry. But heads up, you had a typo - you spelled Beyonce wrong when talking about the Queen of Music.
medosuxx: 6/10
Maybe a bit schizo with the smilies, I felt like I was going from
to
to
in a matter of seconds. Oh, that's because I was.
Nasiir15: 5/10
Not "I love food" as your lead in.
It started as some sort of list without bullets then deteriorated into sentences without punctuation.
iHypemusic: 4/10
Tell me more! No, really....tell me more.
EdgeOfAddiction: 8/10
Like Katie, you know yourself, and that's a huge asset. I admire that you not only talk about your strengths, but also what you lack. Good on you for that, it takes a certain level of confidence to display your weaknesses so openly.
When will the others?
Marooner5
It makes it so much more difficult. 
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