Challenge 04 Results
MARNIE
7.5/10 - The text that you used seems to dull boring. Try to make you're banner POP, it's supposed to be for summer.
6/10 - The banner looks really great and professional, and you're definitely improving in this game. It's just too bad that you didn't add in the summery theme to really make it stand out.
4/10 - Nice and simple, however not very eye catching and may fail getting attention.
6/10 - The background graphic is cool, but I don't like what you did the font - it does not fit the style or the color scheme of your banner. Overall, I don't really sense any connection to summer.
SHAV
8/10 - Too simple, but I absolutely the color scheme.
8/10 - I love the simplicity of it, but I feel like you could've added in a light design in the background to keep your attention drawn in to the picture, but it somewhat fits the summer theme, although red reminds me more of the fall.
7/10 - I love the layout of this one, everything is carefully blended in, however the colors don't seem that summery.
7/10 - It looks good, but it's a little bit and only very loosely connected to summer. If you're going to put "sounds of summer" right there in the banner, then sell us on the point.
ETERU
7/10 - Comic books, okay, but I feel like it needs more.
10/10 - This is amazing! Everything about it is just stunning, keep it up!
9/10 - Took me while to figure this one out, but it is very detailed, very well designed and fits the summer season very well
10/10 - Wow! I have no idea how you pulled this one together, but it looks absolutely incredible! I hope you put it to actual use, because a banner so beautiful should not go to waste.
SATELLITES
8.5/10 - I love the dark and playful vides I got from this. Glad to see a certain Cali Gurl on here, too!
10/10 - This is a masterpiece. The darkness of it with neon colorful lights just screams underground dance music and reminds me of David Guetta covers. It's very modern and it's flawless.
6/10 - I love the font and the way you have created the layout, but this one has too much going on in it, and it isn't really effective.
9/10 - Graphically, it's a complete home run. I love the font and the color scheme. But again, the connection to summer is lacking for me. I could see this banner working any time of year.
MARIAH
9/10 - Simple and to the point. Katy!
10/10 - This is such a unique and successfully creative way of displaying summer, and it's so true. It has such a Jersey vibe to it, riding down the parkway on summer weekends. The old school style coloring and photography are all perfect. One of the best entries since Commercial Jungle began. Loving the license plate too!
4/10 - I'm sorry, but this is too simple for me, I like your creative idea, but it looks like it lacks effort.
6/10 - I normally like your work, but something about this one just strikes me as off. One major problem I can put my finger on: it barely feels like a banner. I like the cutesy concept, but ultimately, there is no real place to focus your attention and the title is lost in the shuffle.
MATTY
10/10 - P E R F E C T I O N ! O M G ! O M G !
9/10 - This came out great, and you definitely improved. This reminds me of a travel brochure and I definitely want to go to that beach. Great job!
7/10 - Really nice and well designed, but the 3D style doesn't work very well for me. I always think it looks most effective when it is 2D, the font lets this one down
8/10 - I respect the playful beach vibe that you were going for here. And I really like what you did with the Beyonce and Rihanna cutouts. But it just strikes me as kind of over-the-top.
MUSICLOVER
10/10 - I love it! It's chilled out, but it also has a modern vibe. I dig it.
9/10 - It would be unfair to give you a different score from Matty, yours are unintentionally so similar.

It has a cool modern tropical vibe, and once again, I want to go to this beach! You have been consistant throughout this whole competition, and I expect to see you in the finale.
10/10 - I love how each of your entries are very original and I can easily tell it is you who has made it! Very summery, and basically perfect!
9/10 - I would consider this a more successful version of Matty's, simply because it eliminates that slight cheese factor. I'm not crazy about the weird lighting stuff, but the title and slogan are great.
STICKS
6/10 - Eh, you seem like you're far behind the others.
8/10 - I'm loving how trippy this looks, it's so creative. I can see what you were thinking on trying to make it look summery, but to be honest the most summery thing about it is that it reminds me of the club scene.
5/10 - Looks like you have worked so hard on this, and I can tell you have put a lot of effort in, but like some others roo much is going on, and it doesn't look summery.
3/10 - Is this a banner for a countdown or an imaginary concert that you thought up? There is no personal branding. Additionally, nothing besides the title really points to summer; the font used for Lady Gaga and Katy Perry reminds me more of Halloween. And all that abstract coloring is kind of giving me headache. I'll give you a couple of points for effort, but that's it.
The Beatfreak Save
Mariah - Andy's Countdown 2010"This gives off every aspect of summer through the lens of a camera rather than a billboard, and it worked. It remind me of the cool breeze driving down the parkway in the summer heading to the shore. One of the best entries ever, and you improve each week."
Challenge 04 Leaderboard
01. Musiclover - 43/40 (Bonus +5 Pts, IMMUNE - Highest Score)
02. eteru - 41/40 (Bonus +5 Pts)
03. Satellites - 38.5/40 (Bonus +5 Pts)
04. Shav - 35/40 (Bonus +5 Pts)
05. Mariah - 34/40 (Bonus +5 Pts) (IMMUNE - The Beatfreak Save)
06. Matty - 34/40 (Bonus +5 Pts)
07. Marnie - 23.5/40
08. sticks - 22/40
09. MonsterRoco - 00/40 (Eliminated - No Submission)