I really wanted to do a fairy type song because I had this melody/instrumental in my head that was so good but I could not find lyrics that would fit it at all

went with ice(?)
I don't really know how my song would be received because I am still trying the pop route and I feel like I'm not really that great at it yet. Here for reviews though, hopefully I can get some tips to refine my pop style.
My fave lyric though
Quote:
The crash of ice under my feet
Mirrors my steady heartbeat
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