[Moonchild]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

I literally praised somebody in the same batch as you for their rap lyrics "i'm sorry for your career bereavement, can’t help but think you were fleeting" but sure, I 'dislike light hearted songs' ��

Citrus - Father

First off, I don't know how you thought it was at all a good idea to submit a vulgar rap song as your introduction to a new panel member, but okay. It felt vulgar and contrarian just for the sake of it. The overuse of random and irrelevant references was annoying and unneeded. It is evident by the writing skills that you showed here, that you are capable of actually writing a good song - but this just isn't. You wasted what was possibly a great opportunity to write something completely representative of you and say anything you wanted to say, but instead you decided to write this. I don't really know why the Free Zone is your chance to show yourself, not to write a parody song. And, if this is really what you want your style to be, then thats cool to, but it's not for me and I can't understand why you'd wanna waste your talent or something like this.

Moonchild - Summer Goes

Melodically, this is probably the strongest of the whole bunch. The lyrics don't really match that, though. They're basic. You went for summer bop obviously (which is fitting for the instrumental so I get it) but it isn't impressive. It's cute definitely, and I liked it, but you kinda have to look at it for what it is and it's pretty basic. Though, the song in general was really well written so I can't give you an awful score that the negativity probably would lead you to expect!

Both of which the rest of the panel critiqued without criticizing the genre.

[Tylerbv]

Originally posted by Dylobs

Don't worry, I bought enough copies of PRISM for the both of us

I bought 3

The shade to Godcole when you can literally see the light of Satan in Titi's eyes.


Who buys more than one copy of an album? Especially an album that has a song that starts with "You sent a text."

[Dylobs]

Originally posted by Tylerbv

The shade to Godcole when you can literally see the light of Satan in Titi's eyes.


Who buys more than one copy of an album? Especially an album that has a song that starts with "You sent a text."

Um I do especially when you're a devoted fan And I never said I claimed the Kesha reject that is This Is How We Do Ghost

[keshaspearsxo]

Thank you for proving that I have judged at least three lacklustre entries in my time as a judge, I figured that was a given though

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by PhreshDiamond

Ok thanks i'll werk on my meter for the next song, the thick shade at the end of this though, i'm screaming.

Thank you for respecting my opinion and aiming to improve

[Moonchild]

I could respect your review of my song if you had written one.

[PhreshDiamond]

i've heard on the grape vine that hugmari has sloppy writing

[Hugamari]

I know a TIHWD stan is in here, but...

Katy could've kept it, to say the least.

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by PhreshDiamond

i've heard on the grape vine that hugmari has sloppy writing

I heard through the grape vine that the next challenge will require writing coherent sentences. Guess that's the end of the line for you!

[Aurora]

Originally posted by Jackson

let me compile my reviews and hang them on my kesha

You didn't tho.

[Achilles.]

Originally posted by Hugamari

This is character assassination

Huga wants to be excluded from this narrative, one that he has never asked to be part of.

[Tylerbv]

Originally posted by Dylobs

Um I do especially when you're a devoted fan And I never said I claimed the Kesha reject that is This Is How We Do Ghost

Kesha can do better than Toast. Haven't you heard her hit anthem Kiss N Tell? That song turned me straight for like 20 minutes.

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by Moonchild

I could respect your review of my song if you had written one.

We discussed a little about it in dubtrack, lol. I would've mentioned that you structure, meter and all that was great - but there were two reasons I decided not to: this is your third time competing and both of us are well aware that you know how to write a song, and, I wanted to avoid any positivity in your review as to not give the impression that I was anything but displeased by your entry

[PhreshDiamond]

Originally posted by Hugamari

I heard through the grape vine that the next challenge will require writing coherent sentences. Guess that's the end of the line for you!

bitch

[Dylobs]

Sassy Hugamari is a Sexy Hugamari

Originally posted by Hugamari

I know a TIHWD stan is in here, but...

Katy could've kept it, to say the least.

It's ok. No one ACTUALLY stans TIHWD unironically

[Moonchild]

Originally posted by Tylerbv

Kesha can do better than Toast. Haven't you heard her hit anthem Kiss N Tell? That song turned me straight for like 20 minutes.

N, my most vivid memory of Kiss N Tell is a baby drag queen trying and failing to lip sync it.

Animal and Take It Off >>>

[Dylobs]

Originally posted by Tylerbv

Kesha can do better than Toast. Haven't you heard her hit anthem Kiss N Tell? That song turned me straight for like 20 minutes.

KnT should've been a single over BBB

[Hugamari]

Originally posted by PhreshDiamond

bitch

Did Rihsus make this

[Moonchild]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

We discussed a little about it in dubtrack, lol. I would've mentioned that you structure, meter and all that was great - but there were two reasons I decided not to: this is your third time competing and both of us are well aware that you know how to write a song, and, I wanted to avoid any positivity in your review as to not give the impression that I was anything but displeased by your entry

Okay, then. Thank you for your thoughts

[Aurora]

Originally posted by Hugamari

I know a TIHWD stan is in here, but...

Katy could've kept it, to say the least.

Just like Kesha should have kept Boy Like You... oh wait, she sold it on to some random Austrian nobody!

This doesn't work at all because I love Boy Like You help me