Tournament: 💎 DIAMOND HIT 💎 - Page 191

PhreshDiamond

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Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

Pears Batch #1

PhreshDiamond - Apologies to Those Competing:
You had some lines that actually did punch a bit and you did drag a bit, but the meter is messy and other parts were pretty much incoherent. Still though, quite an interesting entry. As far a novelty/non-emotional songs go, this style is oddly intriguing. I wanna see if you'd actually be able to deliver in other challenges which aren't as open as this. [/color]

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Ok thanks i'll werk on my meter for the next song, the thick shade at the end of this though, i'm screaming.

Moonchild

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Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

You could write an actual song

I did. It used clever lyrics, snappy wordplay and tight flow. It's a well-written novelty song. Songs don't need to be deep or emotional to have merit.

Cupid

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Originally posted by Moonchild

I did. It used clever lyrics, snappy wordplay and tight flow. It's a well-written novelty song. Songs don't need to be deep or emotional to have merit.

Fun size pears confirmed

PhreshDiamond

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Originally posted by Moonchild

I did. It used clever lyrics, snappy wordplay and tight flow. It's a well-written novelty song. Songs don't need to be deep or emotional to have merit.

Thank goodness, because I might as well pack my bags and leave round 1 now, if they did

keshaspearsxo

Imagine talking about this as though you had written the next Bohemian Rhapsody or something

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Originally posted by Moonchild

Candyman

I don't know what you want other than praise, and I have none of that to give. You know how to write a song, so write a good one - this will never impress me

BODERLINE

Gonna submit early next round. Batch 3 is not the tea

Jackson

let me compile my reviews and hang them on my kesha

MattyTacos

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Originally posted by BODERLINE

Gonna submit early next round. Batch 3 is not the tea

Tomorrow is a new day

Dylobs

Bohemian Rhaspody is kind of gross anyway

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Originally posted by Jackson

on my kesha

Tylerbv

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Originally posted by Jackson

let me compile my reviews and hang them on my kesha

wait...

Dylobs

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Originally posted by Bey Admired

You don't know **** about music. I'm not going to suck up to the judges like everyone else. I could write Bohemian Rhapsody and all you'd say is how 'forced' it sounds. Do better.

Achilles.

kesha pears fronting like kesha wouldn't have written Candyman.

Cupid

Candyman is my new anthem I love it for various reasons

Tylerbv

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Originally posted by Dylobs

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keshaspearsxo

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Originally posted by Achilles.

kesha pears fronting like kesha wouldn't have written Candyman.

That is not much of a compliment for the song

Dylobs

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Originally posted by Tylerbv

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I kinda wished he would have competed this season.

Want to see if he can write a Thriller (another overrated terrible song)

Tylerbv

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Originally posted by Dylobs

I kinda wished he would have competed this season.

Want to see if he can write a Thriller (another overrated terrible song)

fff i'm not one of those people to be like DIS SONG GOOD CUZ ITS OLD
but thriller is THAT bop
michael did THAT

but i also wish he was competing, wouldve been more dramatic

RihsusChrist(ATG)

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Originally posted by Moonchild

I did. It used clever lyrics, snappy wordplay and tight flow. It's a well-written novelty song. Songs don't need to be deep or emotional to have merit.

I feel your pain.

Sounds like an argument I tried to make a couple of seasons ago with no success.

It's a fun song...playful, and raunchy. Very Lil Kim-esque.

keshaspearsxo

Where is Lil Kim now?

Exactly

Tylerbv

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Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

Where is Lil Kim now?

Exactly