But you obviously trolled the hell out of your last entry to get that low of a score cause you thought your average would save you. (Either that or it was just really bad but I don't believe that)
Idk why you are making assumptions about my entry when you don't know the context behind it. But go ahead.
I can take the song not being super rocky, that makes sense. And I don't syllable count or do meter **** so I'll take the clunky parts, too. But don't you DARE come for me for being cheesy in a country song, the drag queen of music genres.
OK but I've never seen the property brother's mentioned in a country song before It was cute at best
mxtthewdelrey – Harvey
My biggest problem here is that I got almost no sense of “poison” from your song apart from a sole mention at the end. There was no imagery and no emotion that gave me any indication that poison was your type. Your chorus was a little too simplistic. Songs this round have had a recurring problem of using the “oh, ___” line in their chorus when it has no actual meaning and is simply filler. Having a 100% filler chorus definitely isn’t a good thing, and it puts all the weight on your verses. The verses themselves are sufficient but the bridge was full of awkward rhymes and clunky lines. The emotion here was raw and real but I felt as if it could have been executed better. It felt like you were writing just a song as opposed to a song for the challenge, and just stuck in a poison word at the end.
Do you remember the time you killed my brother? You told me you would repay me, and now is your chance. You have to step up to the mark.
I was referring to consistency in theme not historical accuracy
It was cute at best 
