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Originally posted by Lucky#17
An overall positive critique - I'm just glad it was a progression from last round, at least to Jackson. I do disagree with the "poetry" comments. The way I look at songwriting - it's practically poetry just put to music. When you say that a certain type of poetry wouldn't work in music - I don't really get at that. Our entry definitely wasn't the safe-commercial type, but that comment rubbed me off as if our entry needed to be more commercial / Top 40 like. Hm, maybe it's just our different perspectives. Am excited to see the other judges' reviews.

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The way I meant it with that line is that I can't see that line being sung. With the length of the line, the way it flows, and the words you used I just can't imagine a melody over those lyrics. That's all
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Originally posted by Nait Phoenix
If I got a markdown for my color coding… 
Thanx, Jack…
I'll try to delve more into the story aspect! 
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