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Tournament: PLATINUM HIT 9
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Originally posted by Citrus
Just came up with a great unique idea!! One singer is in love and the other isn't 
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Originally posted by UFO
Wait Tempura won? I thought it was Swiftie 
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I'm who SHOULD HAVE won, thanks!
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wome isn't a word, swiftie!
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I only ask cos the subject im writing about is kinda broad so it would be kinda basic to be like "this is good" and "no its bad". Like, it's so predictable? Or to rephrase, there a lot of nuances to what is my current inspiration.
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Originally posted by Hugamari
wome isn't a word, swiftie!
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Ignore the mytpos
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Originally posted by keshaspearsxo
Well, I think if you have something compelling to say in the first place, you don't have to then go and contradict yourself.

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Juxtaposition =/= contradiction

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Originally posted by UFO
Juxtaposition =/= contradiction

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An orange, and a clementine, and a tangerine are all the same thing.
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Originally posted by keshaspearsxo
An orange, and a clementine, and a tangerine are all the same thing.
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No, they're variations of the same thing 
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"The Last Time"
(feat. Gary Lightbody)
[Gary Lightbody:]
I find myself at your door,
Just like all those times before,
I'm not sure how I got there,
All roads—they lead me here.
I imagine you are home,
In your room, all alone,
And you open your eyes into mine,
And everything feels better,
[Both:]
and right before your eyes,
I'm breaking, no past
No reasons why,
Just you and me.
This is the last time I'm asking you this,
Put my name at the top of your list,
This is the last time I'm asking you why,
You break my heart in the blink of an eye, eye, eye.
[Taylor Swift:]
You find yourself at my door,
Just like all those times before,
You wear your best apology,
But I was there to watch you leave,
And all the times I let you in,
Just for you to go again,
Disappear when you come back,
Everything is better.
[Both:]
and right before your eyes,
I'm aching, no past
Nowhere to hide,
Just you and me...
This is the last time I'm asking you this,
Put my name at the top of your list,
This is the last time I'm asking you why,
You break my heart in the blink of an eye, eye, eye...
[Taylor Swift:] This is the last time you tell me I've got it wrong,
[Gary Lightbody:] This is the last time I say it's been you all along,
[Taylor Swift:] This is the last time I let you in my door,
[Gary Lightbody:] This is the last time, I won't hurt you anymore.
Oh, oh, oh,
This is the last time I'm asking you this,
Put my name at the top of your list,
This is the last time I'm asking you why,
You break my heart in the blink of an eye.
[4x:]
This is the last time I'm asking you,
Last time I'm asking you,
Last time I'm asking you this...
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Originally posted by UFO
No, they're variations of the same thing 
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Well they all suck! Just like you. Ha!
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Out of the two collaborations Taylor did on Red, The Last Time is  Everything has Changed, on the other hand 
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Everything has changed is wonderful, I like both though
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You can make a comparison between two different things for effect but they don't have to necessarily contradict each other,right? Or am I just confused?
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Originally posted by keshaspearsxo
Well they all suck! Just like you. Ha!
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They're pretty good, actually. Not as bitter as pears can sometimes be.

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Originally posted by Dylobs
Out of the two collaborations Taylor did on Red, The Last Time is  Everything has Changed, on the other hand 
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Wow! You have taste 
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Originally posted by keshaspearsxo
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Mess @ you and some bitch trying to tell me what I taste! Pears are NOT sweet at all. They taste like polystyrene covered in fungi fat. TELL me I'm wrong 
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Quote:
Originally posted by UFO
You can make a comparison between two different things for effect but they don't have to necessarily contradict each other,right? Or am I just confused?
They're pretty good, actually. Not as bitter as pears can sometimes be.

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I don't feel like you have to make a point then contradict it to use juxtaposition in your song. The point of you song can be the juxtaposition of two forces, like a battle of the mind or something.
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"sweet" fruit. Tomatoes are sweet, they're a fruit. I don't see them listed
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Originally posted by keshaspearsxo
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The recipes don't lie
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A preview of my entry... unscramble the words!
I eden uroy epen rome tnah I ened a tafreh
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