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Tournament: PLATINUM HIT 9
Member Since: 9/1/2012
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Originally posted by Tymps.
You all should go to the Holy Trinity thread and make a post so we can get to page 100 and I can start results
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Originally posted by MattyTacos
Those songs were all "I love you and I love to love you while I'm loving you"
Like no bitch, that ain't storytelling.
Did those bitches not bother listening to ONE Taylor Swift song?
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Right? What were they thinking?
 Tough Love
He would cruise the sunset with me
And we would hold hands like everything was fine
But I would bury the darkness
Underneath the fake starlight we hid behind
My heart was tethered to his waist
And we would embrace like everything was right
Each kiss – a lie, only had pain on my side
Love’s mist took over when I ran back to him
I thought it’d be over but nothing ever is
And nothing was all I did
Every waking moment I would cry
Not in fear but to make you realise
Thought it was my fault, thought you would change
But hit after hit it stayed the same
I felt so weak, I felt so numb
Without, without, without your tough love
I fell too deep into your heart
And I became used to your tough love
I wondered if I could hurt you too
See you die a thousand times, bruise after bruise
I waited for you to undo
The emptiness I feel when I’m not abused
By you, and I’ve come to lose
All sense of identity, there is no use
Fighting when you’re stuck in a room with old news
I waited, no plan, knife in my hand
If this is love then I can’t understand
But I got a call, was a man
He told me you jumped and that I should relax
Knife was no longer in my hand
I crumbled to the floor and began to laugh
I wasn’t sure why but now I feel alive
Love’s mist took over when I ran back to him
I thought it’d be over but nothing ever is
And nothing was all I did
Every waking moment I would cry
Not in fear but to make you realise
Thought it was my fault, thought you would change
But hit after hit it stayed the same
I felt so weak, I felt so numb
Without, without, without your tough love
I fell too deep into your heart
And I became used to your tough love
Been five years counting and now I can begin
To live without a ghost who’s still haunted
I tried everything but pain was all I knew
Maybe I had to fall before I could bloom
I will miss you, I will miss you but I won’t miss this tune
Every waking moment I would cry
Not in fear but to make you realise
Thought it was my fault, thought you would change
But hit after hit it stayed the same
I felt so weak, I felt so strong
Without, without, without your tough love
I fell too deep into your heart
But now I can live without your tough love
Love’s mist took over when I ran back to him
I thought it’d be over but nothing ever is
And nothing is all I fear
Tbh I lowkey hate how Tough Love is my first and only #1 hit. It's a cute song and is something different from me but my #2 hits Nighthawks, Chrysalis, When They Cry were so much better 
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Originally posted by Ventitonic
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GURL 
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Quote:
Originally posted by UFO
Right? What were they thinking?
Tough Love
He would cruise the sunset with me
And we would hold hands like everything was fine
But I would bury the darkness
Underneath the fake starlight we hid behind
My heart was tethered to his waist
And we would embrace like everything was right
Each kiss – a lie, only had pain on my side
Love’s mist took over when I ran back to him
I thought it’d be over but nothing ever is
And nothing was all I did
Every waking moment I would cry
Not in fear but to make you realise
Thought it was my fault, thought you would change
But hit after hit it stayed the same
I felt so weak, I felt so numb
Without, without, without your tough love
I fell too deep into your heart
And I became used to your tough love
I wondered if I could hurt you too
See you die a thousand times, bruise after bruise
I waited for you to undo
The emptiness I feel when I’m not abused
By you, and I’ve come to lose
All sense of identity, there is no use
Fighting when you’re stuck in a room with old news
I waited, no plan, knife in my hand
If this is love then I can’t understand
But I got a call, was a man
He told me you jumped and that I should relax
Knife was no longer in my hand
I crumbled to the floor and began to laugh
I wasn’t sure why but now I feel alive
Love’s mist took over when I ran back to him
I thought it’d be over but nothing ever is
And nothing was all I did
Every waking moment I would cry
Not in fear but to make you realise
Thought it was my fault, thought you would change
But hit after hit it stayed the same
I felt so weak, I felt so numb
Without, without, without your tough love
I fell too deep into your heart
And I became used to your tough love
Been five years counting and now I can begin
To live without a ghost who’s still haunted
I tried everything but pain was all I knew
Maybe I had to fall before I could bloom
I will miss you, I will miss you but I won’t miss this tune
Every waking moment I would cry
Not in fear but to make you realise
Thought it was my fault, thought you would change
But hit after hit it stayed the same
I felt so weak, I felt so strong
Without, without, without your tough love
I fell too deep into your heart
But now I can live without your tough love
Love’s mist took over when I ran back to him
I thought it’d be over but nothing ever is
And nothing is all I fear
Tbh I lowkey hate how Tough Love is my first and only #1 hit. It's a cute song and is something different from me but my #2 hits Nighthawks, Chrysalis, When They Cry were so much better
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Tough Love - 8
The first verse goes in hard. It’s so well written. Pretty sure this is already your best song. The starlight line is probably my favorite part of the first verse. I didn’t like the repetitiveness in the pre-chorus of nothing. I liked the chorus but I thought the mentions of the song title came off rather awkward and a bit forced. Verse 2 and 3 were great but I don’t think they held a candle to the first verse. The bridge is much better than the last two verses. The ghost line is amazing.
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Originally posted by Ventitonic
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Bitch! are you trying to get eliminated?
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Originally posted by MattyTacos
kii |
"Pretty sure this is already your best song."
dd Pitchfork teas 
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Member Since: 4/3/2014
Posts: 18,319
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Originally posted by MattyTacos
Wait! I think you're right.
I was pressed because y'all didn't know how to STORYTELL.
I'M GETTING MAD AGAIN.
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This is the tea. A lot of yall just be stitching together random unrelated imagery and hoping it works.
I'm on the other side of the spectrum though. Can tell a great story on two verses but couldn't master imagery if my life depended on it
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Originally posted by Ventitonic
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OMG. 
I ****ing love you.
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Originally posted by UFO
"Pretty sure this is already your best song."
dd Pitchfork teas |
I obviously meant of the songs you submitted that season, thx u
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Originally posted by ceremonials
This is the tea. A lot of yall just be stitching together random unrelated imagery and hoping it works.
I'm on the other side of the spectrum though. Can tell a great story on two verses but couldn't master imagery if my life depended on it
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You just described Temporal's entire PH career 
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Member Since: 9/1/2012
Posts: 25,973
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Quote:
Originally posted by MattyTacos
I obviously meant of the songs you submitted that season, thx u
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From just the first verse? fff
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
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Quote:
Originally posted by UFO
Right? What were they thinking?
Tough Love
He would cruise the sunset with me
And we would hold hands like everything was fine
But I would bury the darkness
Underneath the fake starlight we hid behind
My heart was tethered to his waist
And we would embrace like everything was right
Each kiss – a lie, only had pain on my side
Love’s mist took over when I ran back to him
I thought it’d be over but nothing ever is
And nothing was all I did
Every waking moment I would cry
Not in fear but to make you realise
Thought it was my fault, thought you would change
But hit after hit it stayed the same
I felt so weak, I felt so numb
Without, without, without your tough love
I fell too deep into your heart
And I became used to your tough love
I wondered if I could hurt you too
See you die a thousand times, bruise after bruise
I waited for you to undo
The emptiness I feel when I’m not abused
By you, and I’ve come to lose
All sense of identity, there is no use
Fighting when you’re stuck in a room with old news
I waited, no plan, knife in my hand
If this is love then I can’t understand
But I got a call, was a man
He told me you jumped and that I should relax
Knife was no longer in my hand
I crumbled to the floor and began to laugh
I wasn’t sure why but now I feel alive
Love’s mist took over when I ran back to him
I thought it’d be over but nothing ever is
And nothing was all I did
Every waking moment I would cry
Not in fear but to make you realise
Thought it was my fault, thought you would change
But hit after hit it stayed the same
I felt so weak, I felt so numb
Without, without, without your tough love
I fell too deep into your heart
And I became used to your tough love
Been five years counting and now I can begin
To live without a ghost who’s still haunted
I tried everything but pain was all I knew
Maybe I had to fall before I could bloom
I will miss you, I will miss you but I won’t miss this tune
Every waking moment I would cry
Not in fear but to make you realise
Thought it was my fault, thought you would change
But hit after hit it stayed the same
I felt so weak, I felt so strong
Without, without, without your tough love
I fell too deep into your heart
But now I can live without your tough love
Love’s mist took over when I ran back to him
I thought it’d be over but nothing ever is
And nothing is all I fear
Tbh I lowkey hate how Tough Love is my first and only #1 hit. It's a cute song and is something different from me but my #2 hits Nighthawks, Chrysalis, When They Cry were so much better
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OMG Nighthawks is more iconic than this whole judging panel's discography tbh
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Member Since: 8/19/2013
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Originally posted by Jackson
No problems =/= a 10. A 10 should absolutely SCALP you, not just be technically proficient (my new favorite term)  |
Not being scalped IS a problem though. If a song isn't a 10, you obviously have problems with it!
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Originally posted by UFO
From just the first verse? fff
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Says a lot about your other work that season then
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Originally posted by MattyTacos
You just described Temporal's entire PH career |
the tea
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Quote:
Originally posted by MattyTacos
You just described Temporal's entire PH career |
the tea
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Member Since: 4/3/2014
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Temp has like7 #1s so it's clearly not much of a guessing game for him. He has the secret formula
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Member Since: 1/13/2012
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Originally posted by MattyTacos
My reviews for the PH8 final round was TOP notch tho  |
I didn't win so **** you
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Member Since: 1/1/2014
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Originally posted by Temporal
Not being scalped IS a problem though. If a song isn't a 10, you obviously have problems with it!
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Fine, next time I'm giving you a damn zero you crusty witch
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