The second album I wrote I made it my "dark" era, where I basically wrote from a pessimistic POV and explored like the darker sides to things. One song was called 'Good times never last' and another 'queen of clubs', which was basically about a pole dancer who craves fame and leads a self destructive lifestyle addicted to drugs and abuse etc.
I am working on my first rap song called 'Tintinnabulation', it's still not finished but I would like to hear all of your opinions on it, and suggestions how can I make it even better etc.
CakeLikeRihanna - 'Tintinnabulation'
intro:
yo (x2)
verse #1:
i'm eating pizza for dinner
my ***** is more cleaner
gotta go to the bathroom
like vroom vroom vroom
my rhymes are so dope
your rhymes are so nope
your dick is really small
like a tennis ball
chorus:
sometimes i feel like cheese...
(oh jeez) i don't wanna be stang by bees (x4)
verse #2:
you make my ***** shake
like a pizza cake
for ****'s sake
why are you awake?
drink that drink
while i think
blink blink blink
my ***** no stink
chorus:
sometimes i feel like cheese...
(oh jeez) i don't wanna be stang by bees (x4)
bridge:
you're a
bitch bitch bitch
i'm so
rich rich rich (x2)
chorus:
sometimes i feel like cheese...
(oh jeez) i don't wanna be stang by bees (x4)
Great piece, CakeLikeRihanna! Thank you for sharing!
I just love that overarching metaphor of the [big] cheese in the chorus. Really speaks volumes about economic inequality resulting from a capitalist society, and raises the question: does a capitalistic existence necessitate inequity and and, and a result, does it therefore beckon prejudice and discrimination?
All that can be said to the "one percent" is "oh jeez." While the opulent feast on caviar and truffles, the destitute must eat "pizza for dinner." Yet, there's a more simple allure to pizza that extortionate foods lack. There exists a beauty in life that is absent in the experiences of rich. With the bridge, the line "I'm so rich rich rich" exposes the true meaning of the word "rich." "Rich" is not quantitative but rather qualitative. Even if someone's not rich financially, they can still "feel like [the big] cheese."
Wonderful work you're done, CakeLikeRihanna. A song for the mind.
This is another rap song
I wrote for my mix tape
I already recorded just waiting for it from my producer
This is my I'm the best, attitude, song!!! "Blastoff"
My flow so slanted you can call it Harajuku
And I知 going super saiyan like my mama named me Goku
I知 blazing. I知 amazing. I知 so motha****ing crazy
If you got a lot of money, then I値l let you call me baby.
I知 long and I知 strong and I got it going on
******s think they know me but I think the got me wrong
Bitches try to play me it痴 the reason that they gone
By the end of this song
He a loser and he no good. He a liar, and I知 too hood
To be waiting on a maybe. I致e been feeling good lately.
Some people try to change me so I throw them in my basement.
I知 ready for my blast off, my blast off
Some haters think they real tough, Should shut up
I知 ready for my blast off, my blast off
I知 ready for my blast off, to take off
You know I love my girls but no hetero
And I知 fine all alone like serio
Cause he a earphone and I知 a stereo
You can call me el Rey..Mysterio
See I知 super and I知 duper and I値l make brain go stupid
It痴 the reason that I do this to get your mind feeling lucid
It痴 like blah blah blah blah
Yeah my flow so hard it will knock you out
I知 a winner, you痴 a loser. You a ninja? I知 yakuza
Like Buffy I知 a slayer. You know I知 not a player
If I see a bad bitch, I知 gonna have to lay her
I知 ready for my blast off, my blast off
Some haters think they real tough, Should shut up
I知 ready for my blast off, my blast off
I知 ready for my blast off, to take off
Someone get my rocket ship. Cause I be spitting crazy ****
I知 ready for my blast off, my blast off
I知 ready for my blast off, to take off
You wanna go? You wanna battle me?
I値l start a holocaust. Make it look like WW3
I値l be Hitler. You can be Ann Frank
Hiding in the attic. I知 coming for you with my tank
I'm a winner, and I'm so fly, You a loser, so just don't try
From east LA city. So they call me Danny pretty
I murder all these songs. I don't even take pitty
Someone get my rocket ship. Cause I be spitting crazy ****
Someone get my rocket ship. Cause I be spitting crazy ****
I知 ready for my blast off, my blast off
I知 ready for my blast off, my blast off
I知 ready for my blast off, my blast off
I知 ready for my blast off, to take off
JUST FOUND THIS AGAIN AAAAAAAHHHH
Quote:
Originally posted by Hugamari
Yas do ittttt
Also, is no surprise you didn't finish the first verse Adam, isn't the part after that a reference to a male? You heterosexual beast you.
Quote:
Originally posted by Tymps.
I just left the word "boy" out but I said the line (it's in the second robot voice part)
Great piece, CakeLikeRihanna! Thank you for sharing!
I just love that overarching metaphor of the [big] cheese in the chorus. Really speaks volumes about economic inequality resulting from a capitalist society, and raises the question: does a capitalistic existence necessitate inequity and and, and a result, does it therefore beckon prejudice and discrimination?
All that can be said to the "one percent" is "oh jeez." While the opulent feast on caviar and truffles, the destitute must eat "pizza for dinner." Yet, there's a more simple allure to pizza that extortionate foods lack. There exists a beauty in life that is absent in the experiences of rich. With the bridge, the line "I'm so rich rich rich" exposes the true meaning of the word "rich." "Rich" is not quantitative but rather qualitative. Even if someone's not rich financially, they can still "feel like [the big] cheese."
Wonderful work you're done, CakeLikeRihanna. A song for the mind.
Thank you so much, Tymps. I've worked so hard on it and I'm so glad someone understood the real meaning of my song.
In order to succeed, we must first believe that we can succeed. And I believe in that. I believe in my art. I believe in my music. Every single human being on this planet has a purpose in their life, and my purpose is to create music. Music is a moral law. It gives soul to the universe, wings to the mind, flight to the imagination, and charm and gaiety to life and to everything. Music expresses that which cannot be said and on which it is impossible to be silent. Music is the art of art, the glory of expression and the sunshine of the light of letters. Music is the only thing that you can share with a million million people and you don't lose, you gain. It helps you to get energy and to live long, because when your soul is very happy then you don't want to die, and when you don't want to die you want to live. So, stop everything what you are doing and let the music begin.
Not this new song I'm writing serving Shawn Mendes teas its so cute.
If you want I can you home like in the movies//
Don't ever let me go no no, I wanna prove that//
I'll be here always and forevermore//
Cause you're the one that I love//
You're the one I adore//
I was getting mad at myself because I had bad writer's block for a few months. Whatever I was coming up with wasn't up to par with any of my previous work, so I decided to take a step back and take a little bit of a different approach. I focused a little less on lyrics and more on melody for this one and just tried to make a fun cute love song instead of some profound introspective thing as I usually try to do. It's about my first ex and our eventual transcontinental long distance relationship that was really hard but worth it. It's all about first loves and naive devotion to someone
lyrics
Sailing through oceans blue
On my way home to you
Roaring waves stunt my view
But my wild heart still sails me through
Changing tides rule these depths
Long for one steady step
Even if I meet my death
I do it all for lovers' sake
I'd sail to save the truth
Each salty breath
And sandy depth for you
I'm just an ocean away,
A violet sky,
And ten thousand waves
From your umber eyes
And I say hey
From oceans away
And I say hey
From oceans away
And I say
Sinking where sun won't shine
Bailing out the tears inside
Until I breath and float through time
I'm buoyant as the love i find
I do it all for lovers' sake
I'd sail to save the truth
Each salty breath
And sandy depth for you
I'm just an ocean away,
A violet sky,
And ten thousand waves
From your umber eyes
And I say hey
From oceans away
And I say hey
From oceans away
And I say
Heyo I've found a home
Heyo I've found a home
From oceans away,
A violet sky,
And ten thousand waves
From your umber eyes
And I say hey
From oceans away
And I say hey
From oceans away
And I say hey
From oceans away
And I say hey
From oceans away
And I say
I want to start writing songs... I thought this was good when I wrote it but now I think its cheesy and cringey lol..
If heaven and hell are real like they say then I hope we end up in between
we'll be bad all night and good all day, go to bed in the fire and wake in a dream
I want to start writing songs... I thought this was good when I wrote it but now I think its cheesy and cringey lol..
If heaven and hell are real like they say then I hope we end up in between we'll be bad all night and good all day, go to bed in the fire and wake in a dream
I would call it folk pop but idk 
Yas do ittttt
lyrics