Yeah you obviously did put some effort into that, it deserved serious critiques. Let me try.
I don't find the subject interesting or funny so it's hard for me to personally enjoy this song. There are some distracting typos and the overall tone could be more humorous. Of course you didn't have many words to work with, but the verses in particular are quite straightforward. It has potential though, it's not bad at all. I appreciate that you're doing something different. 6.5/10
See...now that was a fair assessment.
Meowster was the only judge that took the time to do the same.
This is the first weekend since my semester started that I actually get completely free That being said I will do simplistic image hints in just a sec. Just for the top 5 because I need a bit of a break.
Oh Huga I meant to ask, do you mind specifying what you meant in your critique talking about the "reptition" that confused you? Bc I'm not totally sure what you mean
That being said I will do simplistic image hints in just a sec. Just for the top 5 because I need a bit of a break.
