[Lukey]

A lil peek at my song:

(bridge)
Shooting stars across the sky
Never have I felt so high
Filling up my appetite
Flying high like a satellite

Imagine orgasmic production like from this song

[BlueM]

Originally posted by JustLuke

A lil peek at my song:

(bridge)
Shooting stars across the sky
Never have I felt so high
Filling up my appetite
Flying high like a satellite

Imagine orgasmic production like from this song

I once again made something depressing

[Kworb]

Sent my song. I quite like it, hopefully the judges do too.

[keshaspearsxo]

Originally posted by JustLuke

A lil peek at my song:

(bridge)
Shooting stars across the sky
Never have I felt so high
Filling up my appetite
Flying high like a satellite

Imagine orgasmic production like from this song

I spot an issue

[Lukey]

Originally posted by keshaspearsxo

I spot an issue

I'm all eyes

[Moonchild]

Promise me you won't cry; this is our last goodbye.

[Truffle.]

Originally posted by JustLuke

I'm all eyes

The last line kind of throws it off since it doesn't have the same amount of syllables (do you guys call it the meter?) It's barely noticeable though and still works. But lyrical content is great

[Lukey]

Originally posted by Truffle.

The last line kind of throws it off since it doesn't have the same amount of syllables (do you guys call it the meter?) It's barely noticeable though and still works. But lyrical content is great

Ah yeah I see that... Eh it's a small one, I think it can be over looked since it's the last line and could have like a small key change or something.

Anything that makes it reasonable to have one extra syllable

[RihsusChrist(ATG)]

I need help...I'm at 140 words exactly. Can it be 140, or has to be at 139?

[Achilles.]

140 or less. You're fine.

[Kunst]

Dumb question here, are curse words banned? or are we free to use four-letter words?

[KeshasFansRose]

Uni dragged and I came up with a line for a song in my seminar. Then I almost got run over trying to get to my BFs car

[Achilles.]

Originally posted by Kunst

Dumb question here, are curse words banned? or are we free to use four-letter words?

You can use them, but they'll still be censored. I'd suggest:
F–––
S–––
etc.

They're smart enough to fill in the blanks. At least, I hope they are.

[keshaspearsxo]

Treacherous is doing things to me

[Moonchild]

Originally posted by Moonchild

I have a concept but it's so difficult to write. Maybe I should try another.

I wrote a verse! I can do this.

[Vulnicura]

Originally posted by Moonchild

I wrote a verse! I can do this.

[TheCheetahwings]

Can I send someone my song?

[Kworb]

Is it better to add the genre, a description of the sound, etc. or do the judges prefer to have just the lyrics?

[Jackson]

Originally posted by Kworb

Is it better to add the genre, a description of the sound, etc. or do the judges prefer to have just the lyrics?

A description will never count against you, but some judges read them after scoring or don't even read them at all

[Alesus]

I've literally written the first verse for 6 six songs, but i can't finish them

I've never had writer's block this bad