Okay it's rewritten. All the stanzas are eight lines and all the lines are the same syllables, I think. Also the influences are less noticeable I think. And I'm way under 140. Anybody care to re-critique me?
Okay it's rewritten. All the stanzas are eight lines and all the lines are the same syllables, I think. Also the influences are less noticeable I think. And I'm way under 140. Anybody care to re-critique me?
Yes but I'm always obligated to be generally positive and point out vaguely similar things to what everybody else says which will probably actually have very little or no impact on your score if you change it. Unless I really hate it then i don't reply (@ClarksonSlays).
You may hate it but the judges didn't!
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Originally posted by Jack!
I have an idea for where I'm going, just hoping I can execute it well enough.
I'm aware, and confused. But stranger things have happened. MattyTacos won you know?
His language was good but there were some bigger problems with the song, specifically in the structure and other technicalities. I scored him near the middle of the pack #AnalLullaby
